Check it out, appreciate all the love and hate as always. Yes I did do it all in one take after a lot of practice takes...if you can read my lyrics an keep up then I tip my hat.
Peace an apple sauce.
Link to the original video:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SbhWWRxQ8N0&feature=channel_video_title
Lyrics:
I don't wanna be the best
But I be possessed
S ee im stressed so im killin mc's to rest
Its either
beast no less or atleast invest
under the beats arrest
like its given me tourettes BITCHES!
Cheese!!! I wana feel dough like a pizza crest
please your real slow like playin geeks at chess
Sneeze I'll killyo crew an then freeze the West
Crease your necks an MAKE YOU LAZY FUCKS READ SOME TEXT
Beef obsessed like a cannibal tryna Feast on flesh
I get a freaks respects by kickin these feats for sex
I'll only quit Rap when the Devil meets Ganesh
an Jesus speaks im fresh after they all blow weed an meth
usin three Visa checks an then decree my death
inside a peace of cess an when im free to step
I re-watch the Seahawks superbowl, except Mike Holmgren has to be the Ref!!!
sike
im coming hard with bars like chocolates my fetish
you gotta get the medics cuz I'll rock it till my head aches
mixa vodka 5th im reddish I won't stop it till my credits
cuz its obvious my debt is makin odd me be a menace
like robbery pathetic my beats sloppily I edit
but no stopping me im deadless cuz my prophecy is endless
an its probably regretted
cuz I spit so many bars maaaaaan I think outta see a dentist
loco's my motto I'll spit slowmo so follow
this pro's on auto yea take this greatness
haters fakers ya'll can blow an swallow
on this flow an wallow
I do this all day like their's really no tomorrow
What!?
This was good although there are a few things which I would like to point out, if that's alright. Some of the words were mumbled so you need to work a bit on your articulation and make sure that every syllable is coming out nice and clear. Also, your voice was ever so slightly weak. Project a little bit more. Other than that, great job. :D Keep up the good work.
BagonafStudios 11 months ago
@BagonafStudios Thanks, appreciate the feedback, I'll surely work on these things.
moonsoonmenu 11 months ago
Not bad at all man, tryna get your projection a bit better
check mine if you have a sec
PsionicStavros 11 months ago
@PsionicStavros Thanks :D posted my feedback.
moonsoonmenu 11 months ago
hey homie thanx fpr stopping by my vid so of course I had to come thru! ...I would just suggest u practice the fast rap a little more before u post ur final entry for next time because evn with the lyrics its hard to unserstand but besides that one detail u had many high points n u rhymes r good! Keep pushing it homie n I hope to see u in other contest!
nastyboyzey 11 months ago
@nastyboyzey Much appreciated bro, you see another contest tell me and I'll do the same.
moonsoonmenu 11 months ago