I tend to be extremely hard on myself and at times i don't even realize that i am doing it. well now i do, and i want to change. but it won't be easy. at least i have a good start.
To Gain Some Self-Esteem
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The critic lies inside my thoughts today
To heap a world of hate upon my mind
He whispers thoughts to strip my pride away
And leaves me searching love I can not find
He blocks my happy times with all the bad
To cage my soul with bars of worthless thoughts
While spreading fear and loathing make me sad
I need to find a way to let him rot
So start the steps with goals to wage a war
The fight is worth a million hopes and dreams
As this will be a battle without score
The point is that I'm fighting these extremes
Inside his lies the critic tries to fight
And now I know he's never ever right
amen brotha
Bongtasia 1 year ago
good self esteem is not necessarily a good thing.
apes2gogo123 3 years ago
:( that was very sad...I feel the same way
felina86ca 3 years ago
EXCELLENT piece of work Paul!
racham1 4 years ago
More Power 2 u Paul! Another great poem!
Rhjannon 4 years ago
XD
Thank you for that,i liked it. Goodluck & Farewell
Bongtasia 4 years ago
and so the battle for the moosberg mind turns
cyberswaggie 4 years ago