Uploaded by FunkyPurple08 on Nov 17, 2009
An: this is like the third day I've tried to upload this the internet keeps cutting off I'm sorry I gained like 6 subscribers in two days thank you AHHHH I have three days till I see Jonas Im excited
Mel's p.o.v
I sat slumped against the back of the waiting room chair staring at the plain sterile door that both Kevin and Annie had disappeared through. It seemed to me that I was in some kind of shock, I recognised the symptoms well enough, but I refused to act against them. Instead I sunk further into the rather uncomfortable chair letting my emotions over come my body. I needed to know if I could do this if I was strong enough to walk back into their lives to face the consequences of my actions...to face my past. Everything I had ever done in the last year always came back to that day, the day where it had all ended yet in some cruel way only just begun.
Flash back
"Put the gun down Mel" He spoke softly stepping towards me, making me back further into the tree behind, the bark scratching against my tired skin
"I can't do that" I stuttered griping the gun tighter trying to keep in control
"Why not?" he asked deadly serious so much so that it took me back for a moment before I found my voice again
"Because Eric..."
"ERIC" he spat cutting me off as he charged towards me, his face leaning into mine
"You must see it Mel you must know this is not right" he pleaded placing his hand over the gun clutched in my trembling hands
"I would never harm you" he breathed inches from my face my body trembling against his as tears fell down my sooty cheeks to their own accord why did I feel so lost, why did this feel so wrong yet so right to be so close to him
"Please don't" I whispered pressing the cold of the metal against his skin, pushing the gun deeper into his chest. Yet why did it feel like I was doing it to my own. I took a deep breath trying to clear my mind, I had to get this over with...
"I love you" he breathed his breath hitting my lips gently and for a moment I was lost, living a memory that wasn't truly mine. The soft texture of his lips pressed against mine as I continued to live the memory. His free hand wrapped around my waist pulling me even closer to him. I felt him stiffen as the gun pressed even deeper into his chest and for a moment I fought an urge to pull it away from him but I never did. Instead I gently moved my lips from his
"I'm sorry" I whispered the slow movement of my fingers griping the trigger felt under his
"Melody" he pleaded exhausted as he leant his forehead against my trembling one. In that moment I knew I had broken him that I had won he wasnt going to stop me now I was free to end it.
The moment of freedom puzzled me slightly and in that moment of slight hesitation nick collapsed against me. My finger flinched on the trigger but I never pulled, something wasn't right. I knelt down to the floor nick dropping with me. His body laid there limp against the forest floor. My first thought was he had to be faking it, but as I pushed his body on to its side I watched in almost horror as his eyes rolled back into their sockets. An all too familiar panic ran through me setting my nerves and senses alight. What was wrong with him? A sharp pain flew through my forehead the power of it blurring my eye sight. My hands flew to my temples trying to ease the pain away with small circular movements. I had seen this before, I knew it but I just could think, the persistent pain was ignorant to leave.
Diabetes! Yes that was it, that girl Chloe she had caused the fire just to receive nick his shots, but he had never taken them. Why?
Because of me. The guilt that flooded through my body with that thought was overwhelming and I didn't know why. My eyes searched for any glimpse of the rucksack but it had been dropped at some point into the journey and was now lost to the forest.
My left hand dropped to the floor as a sharp image flashed before my eyes. It was so clear so focus it almost seemed like it was playing right in front of me. Nick was running off what looked like some sort of stage, his cheeks flushed his forehead dripping in sweat as his fingers fiddled with a patch at the back of his arm. The image filled me with slight worry but it couldn't stop the thought of my gosh hes beautiful. The image the thoughts they werent mine but they were. My fingertips ran down the smooth structured surface of his still arms a look of admiration filling my heart he was beautiful. My fingertips grabbed his interlocking our hands and that was all it took. My heart seemed too explode as pain screamed through my body bombarding my mind with memories that were no longer forgotten.
A. Do you untie your shoes when you take them off?
Q. No, does anyone lol plus whenever I tie then back up again my sister laughs at me she says I do then up backwards lol . Don't ask me how I think I tie them up just the same as everyone else.
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yes we fianlly found out what happen 2 nick on that day!! yeah i dont untie them when i take off my shoes when ever im going 2 put them back on i untie them first!! hehe i thought i was the only 1 that did that!! hehe
NickJonas4Ever121 1 year ago
wow lol ya I don't pay for my shoes =] in the last like month I made her buy my like 4 pairs of shoes xP
Mrstwilightsagalover 2 years ago
@FunkyPurple08 yeah it was absolutely the best weekend of my life......New Moon was immense and T-Lau with his top off was a lovely view lol :D and as for the JB concerts well the best I've ever been to and I've been to 5 lol :D
Jetzy07 2 years ago
I just realized how much i ABSOLUTELY love your video! sooo addicting every time i read your story i got watch the video first to get IN THE ZONE!!
peacelovejonas5217 2 years ago
GOD!
that makes sense!
gosh, i'm so slow. :|
DougBob93 2 years ago
awesome chapter post soon! i saw jobros on nov 21st @ wembley. they were wicked! i cried during a little bit longer. so plz post soon i luv this story.
spannatoolkit377 2 years ago
I only untie my Converse cuz I don't want t mess them up! loL
AHHHHH!! NICKKKKKKKKK!!! NOOOOOOO!!!!!! wait..he's alive! phew!! i was worried for a sec! great chapter!!!! <3
jdlover63 2 years ago
Ugh!! Some one had to die!! But who! And they heard a gun shot remember!!! I'm still sooo confused but in a good way...don't ask why but I like being confused keeps me coming back for more!!! Great chapter though! Still wanttoknow how she forgot everything?
peacelovejonas5217 2 years ago
I'm going on Friday and Saturday can't wait !!!
Jetzy07 2 years ago
i'm so glad we know what happened. but who fired the gun? didn't it get shot twice? :o
and no, i never do, unless i'm wearing converse, cos then i HAVE to untie them. :L
xx
DougBob93 2 years ago