It's supposed to be a song about an unhealthy relationship. She is the romantic, wanting it all & he is kind of a jerk with that certain jerk-appeal. I may change the lyrics, but I like the feel of the song.
LYRICS:
Summer went she cried again
And couldnt look him in the eyes
Its always the same complaint
You dont appreciate me
When you
Talk me into bed and make me feel like
I am wanted for nothing more than pleasure
More than pleasure
And I just keep on hoping things will change for us
That it will stop feeling cheap with you
CHORUS
But all he gives is a smile
Bittersweet, undefined
If he would call shed leave it all
Leave it all behind
All she wants is a sign
Say the line, say the line
Call it love or call it off
Make it stop, Dont make it..
Its not the same since we forced it
He said stepping closer
It was the only thing to do
You know that
So lets
Shake it off your soul and take this trip with me
Tomorrow its gonna be
An experience
All you need is to get out of your mind
To get out and see
Things differently
Darling you have to
Stop waiting
For a feeling we cant force
CHORUS
A fleeting kiss then a smile
Bittersweet, undefined
If he would call shed leave it all
Leave it all behind
All she wants is his heart
Torn apart, torn apart
By desire in his chest
And nothing less, and nothing less
not my style of music but i really liked it good job dude!
McChud1987 1 year ago
Hey Wow, Love this. Great Stuff Mr. HOPEless Romantic. ♥
JoSieLove2Sing4u 2 years ago
this is wonderful. very well composed my friend ! bravo ! Ciaran
ronb15 2 years ago
Yet another great song! Awesome! Cheers.
InvisibleCrayons 2 years ago
thats was great i loved it everthing was at the same level you kept your pace and your were not hiding your voice under your chords whenyou were playing guitar excellent
krumpin312anime 2 years ago
The song is awesome! The mood is calm definitely like the Smiths, and makes me feel mellow after listening to it! I think the song could also work as a duet! Just my opinion, but it's an awesome song and I love it! :)
theperksofbeingme 2 years ago
This song is fantastic :)
I love the parts when you sing "do do do do do"
haha they just sound really calm and relaxed, despite the lyrics being about a failing relationship.
beautiful song.
roonilismyking 2 years ago
you may not know it, but you wrote this about me. and i agree with the commenter below, a definite smith's feel to the chorus. a completely lovely song.
healthyaddixion 2 years ago
I agree with Justin about the chorus, It reminds me of the Smiths for some reason. Good stuff keep it up
Dave
davemorag1 2 years ago
The chords to the chorus are fabulous. I like the lyrics there as well.
Oswlek 2 years ago