This is a new original song I wrote, which I am recording presently. NYC musician, Eleanor Whitmore, and I had just met this night and she had never heard this song. Yep, she just jumped right in. Amazing talent... go buy her album on iTunes!!! Do it! :) Lyrics to this song below:
"Come Running"
(Copyright 2010 Jasmine Commerce Music)
She's got eyes as big as the sky and a mouth that could swallow you whole
And you want her so bad you could cry, but she thinks you're funny
And she's not as wounded as she would like you to believe,
She's just scraped her knees up climbing trees, stealing honey from her honey bees
And when she's coming down, and sees you're the only bandage around,
She'll call your name, it's always the same, and you'll come running
You bring her flowers and listen for hours at the foot of her bed,
While she carefully empties the curious contents of her head,
Such a pretty little thing,
An extraordinary brain,
You play your aces and in her good graces remain...
But you'll never win her,
You're just a beginner
at a game where she makes all the rules,
You're just one of her fools...
The show always ends the way it begins,
The queen and the jester the best of friends,
And no matter how often it plays,
It's always worth your money,
And when she's feeling low she knows just where to go,
She'll call your name, "Come play the game",
And you'll come running.
Love this song. I play with Trent here and there around the city and he does this very well for you. Great lyrics and tune. I might have to learn this one. Beautiful melody and fun to sing. Great stuff!
BillyRogan 1 year ago
Hi. I’m a singer/songwriter myself. I have been watching many of your youtube videos. I believe them to be exceptional. I don’t know if you get many requests but I would love to hear you sing one of these artists songs. I believe your voice would fit right in. Not to mention that you would get a lot of attention. Your voice is beautiful and when you put your personality and feelings into it, it becomes breathtaking.
rocky1942racoon 1 year ago 2
you have an amzing presence, very visual songwriting, i really feel for the guy in the song.
somsrandomguy 1 year ago
I liked your cover "I will" and this original of yours is great, too, though they are so different that it would be very difficult to know they are sung by the same singer. This piece reminds me of traditional Irish folk songs.
MART0613 1 year ago
This was really very good. LIked it. -Ron
rhopen 1 year ago
Great !
djemai19 1 year ago