This is the first chapter of the Jonas Brothers Love Story called Too Good To Be True!
Starring
Glamorousmodel as Maddy
Olima115 as Olivia
JoBrosLuver92 as Briana
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Chapter 1
"Oh my god, look at this!" Olivia squealed "Don't you think it's gorgeous?"
Maddy turned her head away from the purse she had been checking out, and looked at the T-shirt Olivia was holding up. It was a black T-shirt which looked like it had pink and white paint splattered though the front. Rather cute.
"Yeah, that is nice" Maddy said, examining the T-shirt "Do they have it in other colors?"
"Umm..." Olivia looked back at where she had picked the T-shirt from "Yeah, in pink and white"
"How about black with gold?" Maddy peered at the stack of shiny T-shirts.
"Maddy," Olivia put her hands on her hips "I know how much you like the Jonas Brothers. And I don't blame you, they're hot! But don't expect everything to be in black and gold like their logo"
"I... I don't always go looking for black and gold" Maddy too, put her hands on her hips.
Olivia gave Maddy a look, and pointed at the purse Maddy had been staring at for over 10 minuets. It was in black and gold.
"Coincidence" Maddy said as she grabbed the purse and headed for the cash register.
"Of course it was" Olivia followed her with the T-shirt.
"You'll see how great the Jonas Brothers are when we go to their concert tonight" Maddy pulled money out from her wallet.
Olivia smiled and did the same.
Maddy and Olivia -- they've been best friends since... well, ever.
Just a few months ago, Maddy discovered the Jonas Brothers and went crazy for them. Olivia knew about them way before Maddy did, but thought they were just 'okay'. Maddy decided to take Olivia with to her first concert ever -- Jonas Brothers, of course -- and change Olivia's mind about them. She just had to know that the Jonas Brothers were more that just 'okay', but AWSOME.
"Oh. My. God, Olivia" Maddy gasped as she looked into her wrist watch "5 hours 'till the concert!"
Olivia raised one eyebrow -- one thing Maddy had been trying to do for ever, but never had once succeeded -- as if to say, what's your point?
"Oli, we better get home and get dressed" Maddy said as they stated walking home.
"What's wrong with how we're dressed now?" Olivia asked.
"No way!" Maddy exclaimed "What if we go to the concert, accidentally bump into the Jonas Brothers, and they ask us out!"
Olivia rolled her eyes.
That's one thing about Maddy -- major imaginative. She would spend her whole day daydreaming if she had the time -- over 90% of her imaginations are about the Jonas Brothers, as Olivia guesses.
"Oh yeah" Maddy said as they were walking down the street "I can imagine it now -- Joe and I... Holding hands... You and Nick... Kevin and..."
Maddy suddenly stopped talking. Olivia turned to Maddy.
"What's wrong?" She asked.
"I just remembered" Maddy responded "Can I invite Briana along? I've got an extra ticket. Gabby was supposed to go with us but her boyfriend has tickets"
Kaylie was Maddy's lil sis. She loves the Jonas Brothers too, but no one in their family can beat Maddy's love for JB.
"Sure, why not" answered Olivia.
Briana was a high school senior and was like a big sister to the two. She's a major Kevin Jonas fan -- "I don't know why most people like Joe or Nick" she would say "Kevin Rocks!"
Her room is 100% Jonas Brothers with so many posters you'll probably dislocate your jaw from dropping your mouth wide -- at least, that's how Olivia felt about the room. Through Briana's room is how Maddy discovered the Jonas Brothers.
"Cool" Maddy pulled out her cell phone, punched in some digits and pressed the phone against her ear.
"Hello, Briana?" Maddy said "Yeah, it's Maddy. Guess what? You're coming with us to the Jonas Brothers conce--"
"AHHHHH!!!!!!"
Maddy's words were cut off by Briana's shriek of excitement from the other side of the phone.
Briana said a few more words but Olivia could not quite catch them
"Yeah, uh-huh. I'll meet you at the concert" Maddy shut her phone and shoved it in her bag "She was really exited"
"Yeah it was hard not to tell"
They gave a little laugh, and continued walking home.
*Chapter 1, END*
What will happen next?
Find out on the next chapter of Too Good To Be True!
one part it said "Olivia decided to take Olivia with to her first concert ever"
sharon9172000 4 years ago 3
really? omg i have to fix that:(
thanx for telling me!!
crazybabeJB 4 years ago