Aint No Such Thing As Sunny Days
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@MakTheMc um lol okay so what? an opinion is an opinion and most ppl would say your delivery is whack.
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not bad. Could be better but keep going man you'll improve :)
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@DrCutePuppies Oh shiet good looks didn't even realize that and i have auto spell check
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@MakTheMc Exauste, fean, cuhz, humane. Should be exhaust, fein, cuz and human.
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Gj Bro just work on ur spelling and i think u'll make it ...
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You seem to imply drug use and what i would take as what happens in poverty which often leads to gang fights...is drugs and small town violence not just as bad as war?
TrinityGamingHD 8 months ago
@TrinityGamingHD That's another good point that could be brought out in the song,but like my perspective i was like saying it like the soldiers smoke weed to relax em down b.c of all the bull shit.but i might put that in the next verse cuhz u are absolutely right.
MakTheMc 8 months ago
Not bad. The flow is good, but you could get a lot more raw on this topic though. If your going to make more tracks similar to this in the future, you should def check out Immortal Technique and study the way he spits and writes his lyrics. Keep at it man.. you def got talent and potential.
d0zi7 9 months ago
@d0zi7 thanks bro and immortal technique is fuccing raw, it's kind of hard cause i write shit on my perspective and on how much i know of the topic you know, IT is a gangsta ass history teacher.
MakTheMc 9 months ago
respect for trying but sorry your flow and your just voice and shit it just doesnt sound very good. very ameaturish, and i'm not just talking about the quality it's just. idk
no offense
chabes12 9 months ago
@chabes12
Hello Mak the kid,
Thank you for sending the song you recorded to True Story and for your kind words. We just checked it out and it sounds really heartfelt and your lyrics are really deep. Your flow is on point too; you've got a great voice.
Thanks again for sharing that with us and doing the track justice.
Best Regards,
Sinima Beats<---------Person who created the instrumental
MakTheMc 8 months ago