LIVING THINGS UNDERGO LIFE PROCESS (FROGS)

This video is about the lifecycle of a dragonfly which is told by Elmo who went to a beautiful lake and found this beautiful, gorgeous creature, a dragonfly. Elmo then guides the audience to the process of lifecycle of dragonfly starting from the eggs, until a beautiful adult dragonfly is formed.

PRINCIPLE:ENVIRONMENT BASED LEARNING

Category:

Education

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• education

[eduvidum]

0:25 Do not make the flying entry. Have it big. Don't use red for the font. And can you get a clearer picture of the lake?

0:33 0:51 0:53 1:05 1:11 Don't use red for the font. Make the font size bigger. Elmo hanging from the top can be a distraction for the kids.

Starting from 1:26 please remove elmo from the process. He is just sitting there not helping with the explanation :)

[ituziffipunyer]

CONGRATS...the idea of using elmo as the main sharacter is wonderful.pupils will love it thus motivate em to stay wit the video untill the end of it.the use of real images to show each process is good.however, i think the colour and size of the font isnt clear enough to look at.u may also narrate the video because kids are more into listening rather than reading.overall..GUD JOB!!

[MrRadunk]

For me, this is a good video. You efforts were clearly presented.  The ideas and sound was clearly presented.

notakakidimuka:

1. The tile of the videos is a bit confusing.

2. Use larger font.

[ufetra7]

i like the last song.its very catchy for kids.i think you should look at the title becuase its frog but your video is about dragonfly. the idea is there but maybe narration will make it more effective.then you can improve on the font because in my opinion it is quite small unless there's narration included.overall it is a good piece of work.good job.

[syahrezacesc]

The content is there but the narration is the BIG par that is missing. However, you can still use this video w/o narration but the font should be clear and readabale by the children. Try to focus this video to children as your major viewer. Great effort!

[cheerlust]

It is informative in terms of the knowledge of life cycle.However you can enhance the quality and performance by changing the fonts, making the elmo be at only one particular place, so that children can focus on the descriptions, crop the pictures integrated well. Then your video will be much better, just a liltle drop of my thoughts, thank you.

[ahmadfaizruslee]

Good video although the font is not that big. The song is nice.

[acikg13]

attractive video....surely children will love this kind of video.....very creative....love your ideas in creating the video...children will learn better through your video...hopefully i can be as creative as yours....well done!

[ermabutang]

elmo elmo!! everyone lurve elmo.. even i love elmo.. the font however is quite small for those delicate lil eyes,, mayb u should bold it and enlarge it bcoz i know u wan to keep the elmo colour!! overall i love it!

[nicholasliging]

ayu, how can you miss that Elmo's epic voice? i guarantee you that the children will get attracted and pay more attention to it... the rest is fine...just the font(like the others had commented) and the elom's itself...anyway, you had done a good job!!!