So this is a new song, and I've not actually played it for anyone yet, so congrats, you guys are the first to hear it. It's pretty obvious from the title and lyrics what it's about, so I hope you guys enjoy it:) Let me know in the comments what you think, and all constructive criticism is welcome:)
Lyrics:
Suicide Girl, you've made a mess of your life again
You've got nowhere to run to but those beds that you used to
Your mask is wearing thin
And I tried, god I tried to help you
But I just can't think straight
And you, You couldn't wait to let me down
When you wake up in another strange bedroom
I won't be waiting here, I won't be waiting for you
Don't say those words to me, those same old songs we used to sing
I won't be waiting here, I won't be waiting for you
Cause I've seen you move on the dance floor
Like a russian doll, but you're just showing off
Won't you leave them wanting more?
And do they see the way you cry?
Don't you know that someday everybody says goodbye?
But I don't wanna die alone and you would never sleep alone
So, When you wake up in another strange bedroom
I won't be waiting here, I won't be waiting for you
Don't say those words to me, those same old songs we used to sing
I won't be waiting here, I won't be waiting for you
Dry your eyes, no one wants to see a burnout cry... (repeated)
you sound great sir!
messiahsez 9 months ago
@messiahsez
Thanks:)
MusicOfCavemen 8 months ago
Good job :)
Tubiso 1 year ago
@Tubiso
Thank you :)
MusicOfCavemen 1 year ago