Pursuit of Assumption is another project I did while in college. We were required to do an action piece, so I came up with the idea to do something that involved action, but no actual violence or profanity.
I wanted to try something different that I felt people would find more clever and ironic than the same old typical "lets fight and call eachother fuckers" scenario. I tried my best to put a fun twist on this action short.
Please please PLEASE, rate and comment on my video. I enjoy constructive criticism, as well as hearing when I do a good job. Thanks!!
if the man in the gray sweater said ''there is no money in here'', THAT would have been funnier. One thing though... I seen the whole wallet thing coming a mile away. I was asking myself in the end ''why didn't he just say that in the firsty place? so you should have had him doing sign language in the end and speaking as a deaf person would speak.
themaninblack44 5 years ago
The one thing that kind of bothered me was that your character, had the chance to mention he had the guy's wallet since he was walking in such close proximity.
I thought you really did an awesome film.
mrsubconscious 5 years ago
I thought it was a real good idea for you not to film an actual fight scene, for it can sometimes take you of the film because it becomes the main focus.
I thought the shots were well composed, you had good sound, i thought your editing was good too although in some of the running shots I might've sped it up a little, but that's just me.
mrsubconscious 5 years ago
Awesome man. It would've been funny if at the end he looks in the wallet and either says "There's no money in here!" or "...this isn't my wallet...". XD But this was brilliant!
HavocTT 5 years ago
Great camera work... LOL... wink wink
Neuralclone 6 years ago
I'm almost a video editing professional and this was pretty good. The camera work is some of the best I've seen. I know some things about making videos so here's some comments about the video. You had great camera work, and the unexpected ending surprises your audience. The pursuit could've been more intense, but good. The plot was okay, but you could've been more creative, I would have the guy run after him with a knife, he could've said, "You forgot your knife". But this video was good.
jktvman 6 years ago