2 COMMENTS FOR THE FIRST EPISODE!
(that's not alot! so i do expect you to reach that much)
Jonas Brothers Album Tomorrow! lol. Ratie? Kyan? or Ritney? Wyan? Not very good selections :( So I'm thinking of taking out ryan, jake, & kody's names and put their normal names instead, but I donno. Natie is kind of cute, I guess....anyways, I really hope you like this :)
Waves of guilt crashed over me as the sand seeped through my toes. I laid on my back and looked up at the stars. If this is how one day without her felt---how was I going to live the rest of my life? I took a deep breath as the cold air brushed against my cheek. My hair becoming a mess as the salty water rushed through it. I shot myself forward and dove into the water. I raced to keep the tide from pulling me back to all of my troubles. As quick as ever, I felt my head go under. The last few breaths that could have saved me floated up to the surface. I was out of oxygen. The last moment was the hardest, but I knew it was coming. I fell deeper into the water as the current swept against the ocean ferociously. I lost everything that day, my wife, my daughter, and my life. It was over for me.
i know, it's horrible, right? Anyways, thank you for reading and episode 1 should be up later tonight.
7 MINUTES!
MrsNicholasJonas916 2 years ago
Like I said.
Love it!
ChocolateSmoothie876 2 years ago
thank you, i'll post it in a few minutes :)
MrsNicholasJonas916 2 years ago
Yayness!
ChocolateSmoothie876 2 years ago
lol. i'm working on it right now.
MrsNicholasJonas916 2 years ago
EEEP!
Can't wait ( :
ChocolateSmoothie876 2 years ago
*giggles* wmm takes 4ever! i didn't feel like going onto sony vegas, but now i wish i did :(
MrsNicholasJonas916 2 years ago