I'm really mad. I got 3 comments on my last video in almost 2 days! THREE! IN 2 DAYS! That's pathetic. Like, I think maybe 75 people watch it? WTF. I used to get over 500+ views and over 30+ comments! I mean, how hard is it to type "AWESOME!" and leave?
So this is my new story that's kind of my own. No one else is writing on it, but it's based on a fanvid by PrincetonGirl705 I saw a few days ago. It's so creative that I just wanted to write a story about (yes, I have permission from her, she likes the idea of it being a story). I'm kind of going to use the video as the trailer for it, so here's the link:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GD1GEeqeL74
Just read the sidebar and watch the video and you'll know what the story will be about. (I might change a few things).
Yes, it's Niley. But imagine who you want. I want at least 10+ comments on this before the next one, just so I know if you're going to read it or not.
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Addison Patricks took another look in her small compact mirror before getting out of the car. She applied her clear, extra glossy lip gloss to her pink, plump lips. "There, perfect," she muttered to herself. She gave her hair a quick heave upwards to give it more volume and hopped out of the car with her two best friends, Gracie Garcia and Leah Nichols.
"You look lovely, Addi," Leah said. Gracie nodded in approval of that statement. Addison smiled and replied, "Guys, I don't look half as great as you two do."
Addison was dressed in a small, light pink mini-dress and pink heels, which were much darker than her dress. The curls of her semi thick, medium brown hair caressed her face perfectly. Gracie was dressed in a simple black, medium length dress that has a subtle hint of flair at the end and black flats. Her very dark, very short brown hair was straightened to perfection. Leah was decked in a silver, shoulder-less mini. Her long black hair rested flawlessly on her shoulders and her silver strap heels made her look much taller than she actually was.
"Ready, guys?" Leah asked, linking arms with Addison and Gracie.
"Yeah," they both answered, simultaneously. All three of them then entered the large building that the sophisticated party was located in. It was a school function to raise awareness to the families in Africa with no food or clothes or anywhere to sleep. Each dollar that every person who was attending donated went to charities across the world that helped those familes. When the three of them entered the party, they each happily paid 5 dollars to get in.
After Leah, Gracie, and Addison all entered, they all stared in awe of what they were seeing. Nameless teenagers were surrounding them. There was a huge glass chandelier, which reflected the moonlight from outside, located in the very center of the ballroom.
"Hey," a male voice said, poking Leah on the shoulder. Leah spun around to her boyfriend of a year and a half, Cooper. His arms instantly wrapped around her waist, as they begun to share a short kiss. Leah rested her arms on his broad shoulders. "You look beautiful, Le."
"Thank you. You look pretty good there, too, handsome." A large smile stretched across her face and her brown eyes brightened. Cooper gave her a peck on the cheek in response and then the two of them turned back to Addison and Gracie, who were talking to each other about how amazing this place is.
"I think I'm going to go get something to drink, so I don't have to watch the two of you love up on each other," Gracie joked.
"I'll come with," Addison responded and the two of them walked over to a long table filled with mini snacks, like chips and cheese balls, and 3 different kinds of drinks. "Which one do you want, Gracie?"
"Um, fruit punch, I guess." Addison grabbed a white plastic cup, and then poured some fruit punch into it. After she handed it to Gracie, she got herself some of the same thing.
Addison took a sip of it, staring out into the crowd of people, who were dancing to a song that the unknown hired band was playing. "Do you know this band?"
Gracie looked at the band, furrowing her eyebrows, as she tried to figure out if she knew them or not. "Hm no, I don't."
"They're pretty good," Addison said, looking over at them.
"Yeah, they are and that bass player looks really cute," Gracie responds with a small smile.
Addison looks over at her and laughs. "Yeah, I guess he does but I think the lead singer is pretty cute, too."
"Ew, no way!" Gracie laughs loudly.
"Really? You don't think hes cute?" Addison asks, perplexed. "I kind of think he's marvelous."
"Wow marvelous. Big word. I didn't even know you knew what that word meant."
"Ha," Addison says in a monotone voice, poking Gracie's chest, "you're so freaking funny that I can't stop laughing."
"Ow," Gracie mumbles, rubbing the area Addison poked, but she was laughing.
"Sorry," Addison said, sympathetically. "Let's go dance."
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PART 2 UP SOON.
Is this how you saw it? (Please tell me lol, i'm shit with imagination, when i've seen what their suposed to be like lol) :
Addison= Miley
Leah= Demi
Gracie= Selena
Copper= Joe (If your a Jemi fan)
Lead singer= Nick?
Please answer me, im dying to know xD
Amazing.. Im going to watch, so please post soon :)
EmoScreamox 2 years ago
If you watch the video you know who is who. And you're not supposed to know who the singer is yet. Haha, but the rest of them are correct.
iluvjah2 2 years ago
Nice start. I didn't picture Niley either.
It felt like chapter one to a book or something. :)
xojubellaa 2 years ago
I like how no one pictures Niley in my Niley story. /sarcasm/
lolllll.
iluvjah2 2 years ago