Standup 3-7-08
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Justin Fletcher in Chandler, AZby JLFproduction422 views- 7:41
2007 OU Comedy Fight Night - Tyler Bryceby SalaciousScribe205 views
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Sound Effects - Monkey Bowlby SalaciousScribe8,056 views
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Boggle Pt. 1 - Hit & Run Juryby SalaciousScribe481 views
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Normandia 2006by SalaciousScribe1,546 views
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'Till Death, Us Do Partby SalaciousScribe1,423 views
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Compilation - Songs of Hairby SalaciousScribe2,747 views
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Compilation - Songs of the Gangsterby SalaciousScribe2,961 views
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Scene in a Rap - Rubber Duckyby SalaciousScribe488 views
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Sounds Like A Song - Blame It On The Monkeysby SalaciousScribe498 views
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Clint Vrazel Stand-Up Comedy Compilationby SalaciousScribe1,958 views
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Monologues Only - All I Want For Christmasby SalaciousScribe4,355 views
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Interpreter - Elephant Nose Hair Trimmerby SalaciousScribe1,956 views
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Tax Day - Outtakesby SalaciousScribe266 views
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Interpreter - Dwarf Karateby SalaciousScribe1,093 views
Argh....could you delete one of the extra comments please? I accidently doubled posted LOL.
Please delete this one too.
Lava589 4 years ago
Speaking from what I see (rather than my own experience in comedy, as I have none), as a sub-noob in Comedy....
You seem to have a little better stage presence than in the other videos. Though there were quite bit of filler words right at the beginning (uhh, umm, etc).
The joke about the puppy was a tad predictable (for me), so maybe if you changed the punchline or gave it a little bit more surprise that might give it some "punch". I don't know....just throwing some ideas out there.
LAVA89
Lava589 4 years ago
Speaking from what I see (rather than my own experience in comedy, as I have none), as a sub-noob in Comedy....
You seem to have a little better stage presence than in the other videos. Though there were quite bit of filler words right at the beginning (uhh, umm, etc).
The joke about the puppy was a tad predictable (for me), so maybe if you changed the punchline or gave it a little bit more surprise that might give it some "punch". I don't know....just throwing some ideas out there.
LAVA89
Lava589 4 years ago