Hey guys it's Amanda and sorry if it is late xD
WHAT DO YOU THINK OF THE VIDEO??COMMENT PLEASE
SORRY IF IT SUCKED xD
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It all started out with one dark and gloomy day, Jane was walking out of her fathers car.There,her eyes landed on one curly haired fellow and his landed on her eyes.Instantly the two fell in love as quick as a snap.Before you knew-
~??:HEY HEY HEY!Mandy seriously stop making it sound like a tradgedy!
Mandy:Well Sorry Jenne!Its my story!*sticks out her tongue at Jenne*
Jenne:You can be so immature,seriously why does Nick love you??
Mandy:Well why doesnt he?
??:GIRLS GIRLS GIRLS!Why is Amanda telling the story when its about me?
Mandy:Oh right,take it away Jane!!
Jane:Well it all started off when I ran intohim..~
[~ to ~ means the narrators xD]
FLASHBACK
Jane:*bumps into someone*Oh my gosh Im so sorry!!*looks up to see a curly haired,pale fellow and froze by the sight*
???:It was my fault,Im sorry
Jane:Uh-uh uh uhmMy name is Jane.Yours?
???:Kevin.Kevin Jonas
Jane:Uhm awesome,so whats your first class?
Kevin:Biology.
Jane:Oh maybe you can lead the way,Im heading over there now.
Kevin:Of course.
Through the months the two became attached by the hips.Instantly,one day the two fell in love,thus becoming together as one----
~Jenne:Yo,Thats Illogical!I cant have it!
Mandy:You cant?*fake gasps*WELL STICK THAT IN YOUR JUICE BOX AND SUCK IT!
Jane:Girls!
Jenne&Mandy:Sorry..~
CONTINUING THE STORY.
Everything was perfect as a ripe apple---
~Mandy:Why is it ripe?
Jenne:Because its good okay?!?
Mandy:OKAY HONAY!!!~
(JANE):AS I WAS SAYING.
Everything was perfect until everything fell apart as if the four walls of a room coming down.
Kevin:Jane.Im moving..
Jane:B-b-but YOU CANT!YOU CANT DO THIS TO ME!
Kevin:Im sorry Jane..*walks away*
Leaving the lonely girl heartbroken
3 years later
(???):Through the time,Jane decided to stop venting her feelings and was lucky for her friend Jenne and the SOOPA FINE MANDY to come move to her town---
~Jenne:WHY DO YOU GET SOOPA FINE??
Mandy:CAUSE IM SAYING THE STORY!!GRR!!
Jane:Didnt we just agree it was my story??
Mandy:Oh yeahBut i AM SOOPA FINE!~
(JANE:)STORY CONTINUATION..AGAIN:
Amanda:*in her room reading New Moon*OHH JACOB BLACK!!!
Jenne:WOULD YOU HUSH UP!
Amanda:YEAH YEAH!
??*Secretly watching her from his window through hers.*
???:Nick I thought you didnt like humans..
Nick:Kevin how do you know shes human?!
Kevin:Shes one of Janes friends.
Nick:YOU WERE LOOKING IN THE FUTURE AGAIN WERENT YOU?!
Kevin:Yeah yeah..*walks away*
Amanda:*opens her window*
A Breeze Sends Nick The Scent Of Amanda
Nick:*Inhales the scent that was now burning in his throat.*
Joe:NICKY LIKES A HUMAN!!!
Nick:*hisses*SHUT UP JOSEPH!
Joe:Geesh who pissed in your blood shake from BloodBerry?[A/NLAHAHHA]
WITH THE TWO NEW GIRLS
Gurdian of the two,Kaye:GIRLS GO HANG OUT WITH THE NEIGHBORS OR JANE!
Amanda:Janes at the Jonas residence
Kaye:Why dont you go over?
Jenne:Okay bye Kaye!
The Two Approach the Jonas Residence
FROM INSIDE
Joe:*sniffs*Humans..
Kevin:Janes friends.
Jane:Amanda and Jenne??
Joe:Ask Nick he likes one of your friends blood.
Jane:*looks at Nick*
Nick:*his fists are balled up and tightened and you can see he is in pain,but good pain,from his throat burning from the scent.*
Joe:Oh yeah,its them!
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What did you think??
I know it sucked!
What do you think what will happen at the Jonas house?
What about the writing format??
I can change it if you would like!
Who wants a marathon??
IF I CAN xD
get many people to comment and there WILL be a marathon!!
5 comments for the next one xD
xoxo,JayMANDY~
wow its long xD
manatees97 2 years ago