dedicated to kaitlin (who gets my song stuck in her head at the end)
:]
finally polished it up today from this past month.
i sure hope it speaks for itself.
constructive criticism is much appreciated. :)
Happy [belated] Easter! He's Risen!
God is good. All the time. I learned that soon after spilling this song.
God bless,
KhriziaKamille:)
LYRICS;
this girl's a portrayal
of a colorful mess
the world doesn't know
she's hanging by a thread
silently screaming
trying to succeed but
only falling faster
can't find the time to breathe.
she's the last to know
how everything goes
in this game called life
losing one too many fights
she's tries to do her best
but finds uselessness
to color in between the lines
now she's trying to just get by
she's...
breaking bridges and building walls again
trying so hard
to save her heavy heart
cuz when everything's changed
there's nothing left to explain
why good things have to end this way
she's stuck in the moment
but sustaining it out
trying to unfold that
these excuses for herself
are to cover up the failures
cuz they're all she sees
every slip, mistake and error
become her reality.
she can't see past the white will always last
tell her "please stay strong"
but she's spiraling on
so sick of letting people down
she wants to finish things right now.
she's...
breaking bridges and building walls again
trying so hard
to save her heavy heart
cuz when everything's changed
there's nothing left to explain
why good things have to end this way
she...
broke bridges and built those walls again
trying so hard to save that heavy heart
but time ran out. it's too late
for hope to call out her name.
now that girl resolved to end her way.
have you ever been there?
will you ever see?
just the girl in the mirror looking at me?
© Khrizia Velacruz 2009
I'd really like to use this as a theme song for my book..
it's called bridges, and it's about two girls, actually.
it would make perfect sense :] beautiful, by the way.
SHAWTYxxxxxxx 1 year ago
Wow! u have a beautiful voice! what brand is your guitar?? well, keep it up, and you'll become something big
diva1love2fo3eva4 2 years ago
omg!!!!!!!! i love it so much! ive fav it!!!
BANDEradiostation 2 years ago
hey missy !
its me mia :)
ur so talented. u seriously should sing w/ at RCC. :)
BEAUTIFUL voice.
love you !
-mia
mianneflove3 2 years ago
amazing just amazing :)
angeldust2007rock 2 years ago
your so awsumm
and i love this song!!!
chantelle90 2 years ago
Dude, you TOTALLY blew me away. How long did it take you to write the lyrics? I'm jealous. I play, but the lyrics take me weeks. I haven't finished a song. They're just bits and pieces. Pointers? (:
TWSSProductionsTV 2 years ago
look my guitar actually used for it's purpose... :D
PinayKaDeba 2 years ago
this is great; im not even going to like candy coat this with smiley faces and lol's
this was really amazing.
sceniexbeanie 2 years ago
sounds really good. reminds me of teddy geiger a lot :D
KENG
bbking812 2 years ago