Unconditional Happiness

Is happiness something you would want if it were unconditional?,

If for no reason, at least worth specifying, you found the courage, would it still be justified? To wake up in time to see the sunrise?

Would you be in such awe of these words that .fill frazes if they, in their making, were as easy to recognize, as the backs of the hands you have had your whole life?

If you were not in question of them like the stars, or the way ones opponent must really see things from the edge of their eyes, ?

And when you walk his tireless journey of countless sleepless nights, just to find it really was as simple as they told you once, will you still be satisfied?

To hold the answers, which much like the questions which proceeded them, posses you and may soon come too define,

To end these charming punctuations for whom you breathe, and surly without second thoughts would die

Or are you asking, just to simplify your reasons, despite distain or season, to be considered conclusively and to yourself exclusively, alive ?

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• Spoken word poetry
• poetry slam
• writing

[Kabuki0009]

I love the question ^.^ But I have another for you. In the work by Dante The Divine Comedy, the description of the inferno and the all sufferings of the damned in their unhappy fate is most vivid. But when it comes to the happy place that is paradiso and the endless bliss of heaven, there is something missing, the vivid description of hell far out shines heaven's glories. So the question is would we even know what Unconditional Happiness is? *****stars;)

[1Aware1]

thank you first off for asking, that is a great question to be lead to by these other questions. and no, we certainly would not, it wouldnt be happiness, it would be normall, boaring, everyday, that is exactly why you should not ever aim to be happy all the time, the point is not to always be happy, but to feel what is actuall and know that those feelings alone can never kill you.

[DavidRandallCurtis]

This almost seems like a sister poem to the other one you just posted.... great stuff... you blow me away everytime... and you know, I think people usually look like total dorks when they smoke and read poetry... you pull it off..... like a classey dame in a 1940's film noir movie... 5*/fave/playlisted

[1Aware1]

it is the same poem, i am re doing all of them so most of newly uploaded are repeats, i just got into spoken word and its time i re did the you tube vids to read the way i perform them. thanks

[tinySpectacle]

Like this poem muchly, too. And your reading style here is so very cool.

[1Aware1]

thanks it is the way i perform it at poetry slams

[FreeAdviceForMen]

I'm hooked.

waaaaaay kewl

[dashpoet]

Great questions, well timed performance of your poem. 5*

[MzSkribble]

*5

BRAVO.

[Raven051]

nice job:)