Circle You English Dub: RAW

This is my RAW version of Circle you, or Kagome kagome, the English version. Because I couldn't find someone singing a good version of it.

This is NOT finished. There hasn't been any editing, and it sucks. But I wish for you to comment and tell me what I can do to make it suck less in the finished one. There are some things for this
1)I know it is translated horribly. I did not translate it. I sang the words in front of me. I did not make them.

2)I overused layering. Yes. I did. I admit it. Feel free to tell me to get rid of them

3)I really want you to be critical, but saying "This is horrible" does not actually help my singing in any way. I will continue to be horrible. Please tell me why. I am NOT asking you to be nice. But be helpful.

Thank you very much. I take no credit for the song, just my -horrible- voice. I'll probably delete this when I finish it. Also, this picture was made in a few seconds as a filler. the final will be better, I swear.

Category:

Music

Tags:

• English
• Fandub
• Dub
• Circle
• you
• Kagome
• Kakome
• miku
• luka
• vocaliod
• horror
• song
• FAIL
• RAW
• Redleaves
• Mimi

[OkamiAngel]

i like it the voices make it sound creepier like possessed children. good work.

[0blairwitch0]

ya know...its not that bad.....ah well the circle you part is um well weird....but its still kinda good just if you cut out all those voices when you sing circle you then um well i guess it would be scored as "good try" >.>

[nh7cy]

So.. There's a hiss when you start recording. Voice pops so either get a better mic, distance yourself from it, or get a wind screen. Vocals too loud. Um.. That whole thing where you sing and dub your voice over yourself.. Um.. Fix it. Adjust your volume too. Hmm.. Oh.. I'm sooo not done Aki..