Whiskey Endeavors

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Uploaded by on Dec 18, 2009

A story about a neglected whisk and an oblivious Chef.

Warning: Strong language ensues.

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  • Glenn Talloch!

  • Rare and Olde!

  • Good job Sarah.

    I know you only did the animation, which looks great.

    Your script writers are terrible. I don't know the audience they're aiming for... but vulgarity is an indicator of lazy writing. Plus, the vocals were weak.

    UJ

  • @bigaldin Your critique on my writing is not welcome here. I was going for an atmosphere. It's not lazy writing on my part, it's part of Bob's character and the environment he lives in and created for himself.

  • @MissLela Not welcome? This IS youtub after all. Take the critique and work with it. I personally don't care about the swearing, but everyone has a right to their opinion. On that note, I thought the animation, effects, and rendering were very well done. The only problem i have with the writing is that it comes across as kind of mean spirited and not very funny.

  • Not saying he doesn't have a right to his opinion, I'm just saying that 1) They way he gave "critique" was rude and I didn't appreciate it, and 2) This project isn't about writing, it's about animation and visuals.

    Also, thank you, we did work very hard on the animation and all parts involved. And we weren't going for funny really, so I'm glad you picked up on that too.

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  • Haha, yeah we had some trouble with peoples reaction to the swearing...but its either been you love it or you hate it! Too each his own.

    I'm personally amused just because I love art that gets strong reactions out of ppl...so we must have done a great job! :D

  • Awesome Lela! I'm very proud of all your hard work.

  • @crespuci I apologize, I intended on putting a warning in the sidebar and forgot in my excitement to get this uploaded finally. I hope you enjoyed it anyway.

  • Well, the gratuitous LANGUAGE was a surprise...

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