sound design could be a lot tighter. you've built such a fascinating eerie world here that your title leaves room for endless possibilities as to how to animate your title. I think a super organic(vines/vegitation) possibly a stop motion title animation would be fitting. you could go back and film bits and pieces of the world in a stop motion title into the word "Kamp". maybe leave your name for the end credits, minor adds could really elevate this piece.
Nice. Thanks for clear advice and examples. The new titles are definitely on my plate!
pja79 3 years ago
sound design could be a lot tighter. you've built such a fascinating eerie world here that your title leaves room for endless possibilities as to how to animate your title. I think a super organic(vines/vegitation) possibly a stop motion title animation would be fitting. you could go back and film bits and pieces of the world in a stop motion title into the word "Kamp". maybe leave your name for the end credits, minor adds could really elevate this piece.
obemalto 3 years ago
What do you think would add to the story? Examples? Maybe something more organic? Thanks for the comment.
pja79 4 years ago
everything is wonderful, I would chance the font's style title. looks cheap and not related with the animation.
dewcita 4 years ago