Bleeding Skies - Yin w/my vocals

a song that i really like by bleeding skies
decided to write vocals for it ..sorry if the vocal quality isnt that great D:

all music written by Bleeding Skies
vocals and lyrics written by ME

here are the lyrics


for what reasons may there be
for these clouds soo grey
raining down on me the sorrows of my day
these shades become soo thik
shadows consumeing my imagining

a portrait blotted in ink
the sunshine drifts into the everfall of the ecliptic
and my thoughts wring my heart
until the beats slowly soften
silently
it makes me scream

and the sun fell into the everfall of the ecliptic..

you blacken my world
without a thought for me
as if my being has no meaning
yet my moods are set by you..

as you painted the walls of my mind
you left out the value of light
for you shaded it away..

Now im lost in another night in the shadow of thought
unblessed by this curse that you gave me
in a darkened world that you wrought
your killing me in your own painting
as i lie hopeless in your imagining

Category:

Music

Tags:

• Djent
• Bleeding
• Skies
• Periphery
• Haunted
• Shores
• Spencer
• sotelo
• Progressive
• Metal

[SnakebyteswanaB]

Not trying to be a dick, but everybody saying (weather you like this song or not) that he should do heavier or different shit needs to shut up. Maybe this is his fav style. And besides, you cant tell me his vocals weren't made for a band like this.. Great job bro, its perfect. :)

[Dragonite17]

@SnakebyteswanaB thanks dude :)

[GuitarFox200]

please tell me you are the singer... if not.. WTF this is amazing! honestly, if you got this mixed well... then it would be as good as Periphery and TesseracT! Keep it up!

[Dragonite17]

@GuitarFox200  thanks! glad u liked it :) ima probably rerecord the vocals for this one and mix it better. u should check out the one i did for Entrosolet :)

[Moxxiekanato]

the clean bit reminds me of patrick and pete's dual melodies on take this to your grave by fall out boy, which btw is a very good thing :DD awesome stuff

[Dragonite17]

@Moxxiekanato thanks :) u should check the one i did over "You are (not) Alone"

[TechDeath1018]

I really like this, especially the clean vocal melodies. The only problem I have is that your pronuciation is really weird. But otherwise, it's great. Your screams remind me of Spencer's from Periphery.

[ST3MOCON]

@FeroxX HAHAHAHAHAHA. no.

[kreepmaster]

Its awesome man!!! I like it!

[RyanCummings1993]

\M/_ SICK FUCKING JOB _\M/

[ProtestedHero]

dude you are seriously going places...this is awesome you definitely need/deserve to be heard!!!

[hytek1]

I don't want to be a Troll here... just voicing my opinion. I think once you find your OWN voice instead of attempting to mimic others, THEN you will djent this world... for now, it's still a bit amateur. To leave on a good note; you do seemed to have grasped the concept of melody which I find that a lot of Djent vocalists have failed on.

[RazzyReikoCanFly]

Omg.

Love it.

[cobfan25]

I f************** LOVE your vocal melodic singing man. If i ever start my band project album, id put you as lead vocalist on the spot. idc where you live, I'll drag you out where i live and record you in my studio.