Good in Red
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I was intrigued. Kept my attention. Curious to learn what happened and didn't really catch on until I saw the ring. Liked the word play with the color red. Good job!
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the story is a bit confusing, she's mad at him for asking her to marry him but then at the last minute decides to? weak.
barrenbarrel 4 years ago
Her character is upset at the delivery of the proposal (and the embarassment collapsing), not the proposal itself. I don't think it unrealistic that a person would blow the situation out of proportion, but still want to marry the guy.
AboynamedEtter 4 years ago