This is a story about a magical camera, called Colin. He is given as a birthday present to a little boy and the pair of them have lots of wonderful adventures together. This story is the second in the series. Written and narrated by Nicky Kemp and illustrated by Sarah Bates they are designed to delight children and stimulate their imagination.
Love the colours! The illustrations are simple and effective whilst being detailed to tell the story. Great solutions by Sarah. Your narrations are great and easy on the ear. Maybe the pace may need to pick up a bit, especially between page turns. It would be good to test the stories on the target age range of children to see how the pace and flow meet their concentration and interest levels. It is a compelling story and I was scared! xx
TheVanessaphoto 1 year ago
love this so sweet! i love the character Juliette
forestet1 1 year ago