Yet To Be Titled - Chapter 1A (Intro posted)

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Uploaded by on May 28, 2010

SORRY (In caps) for lack of updates?
Had school and all, i know it's no excuse but sorry..
I'll try to write like more tonight from each story?
Keep reading and commenting awesome subbers!!

After school, i headed to the gymnasium, everyone was pretty psyched about meeting the new coach.. Except me.
My dad, he's a really stern man, he wants something, he WILL get that something.
That's prolly why our football team is top notch, he's a well-respected guy.
I'm sure he wouldn't want his reputation down the drain because the gymnastics team ain't up to standards, he's gonna get us above the standards.

Which makes me happy, kinda, but it's gonna be hell.

When dad entered the gymnasium, everyone's face changes, and again, except mine?
People started whispering to one another and it started to get louder.
His usual frown was there, he put on his stern face and ordered us to "Shut up!".
And everyone stopped, i swear to god, if i were were to drop a pin, you would hear it, like with surround sound?
Then a girl ran in, "Sorry i'm late!!" the girl apologized.
"Why are you late?!" he barked.
"I-I got lost.." she stuttered.
"WHAT? YOUR FIRST DAY HERE??!" He was being sarcastic.
"Yeah.. It's my first day here..." she said looking on the ground.
Dad was dumbfounded, one of the few times he has nothing to say... "Sit down!" his face only got blacker.

"I am the new IC for gymnastics, and you SUCK. So i will have the privilege to toughen you girls up." he stared at us.
Everyone then stared at Adrian and me, because he said "girls".... I'm sure he knows his SON is a BOY? And Adrian, not Adrianna?
And yes, we were the only two boys in gymnastics...
Even though he's my father, he totally humiliated me! In front of all the girls... I could dig a hole through the ground and hide there...

He proceeded to talk to the girls, and dismissed them.
He came to us, Adrian and me and talked to us. After he finished Adrian stood up and took his bag.
"I didn't dismiss you, did i?" he stared at Adrian.
"Uh... But you dismissed the girls?" Adrian stared back.
"Are you a girl?"
"You called us girls just now didn't you?" he retorted.
"I siad i would toughen the girls us, i give up on you two.." he smiled.
"Why you!" Adrian charged towards dad, i jumped up at lightning speed, to me at leat and grabbed him.

Dad had to make it all better, he walked towards Adrian and then said "Try me."
I've never really seen this cocky and thoroughly annoying side of dad yet, i suppose Nick and Kevin don't get it easy...

"You two stay back, i want by end of the month, an excellent routine on the high bar." he said on his way out.
"THAT'S TWO WEEKS!!" Adrian shouted.
"By the end of next week."

Two of us sat there, "Now what?" i said as i looked at him.

The intro is the post before the previous? Also untitled.
And thanks to everyone who reads, and comments are appreciated!!
CHEERS AWESOME PEOPLE OF YOUTUBE.
... YOUTUBERS!

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  • liking it so far :D

  • @BHJB101 ;D Yay! Glad you're liking it!

  • i like the way this 1 is going...lol

  • @itachiuchiah3679 Yay! Thanks! :)

  • My freind wrote a story similar to this a month ago, even Adrian Nick's son is similar cause he is Nick's son and goes to school in her story and even if u dint steal her idea it just looks that way

  • @beautndabeast I'm sorry, besides the name being similar what other similarities are there? I picked the name Adrian, because i like this actor names Adrian Pang? So if the only similarity is that "Adrian" goes to school, then i don't get it. Besides, here, Nick has no son? So it's very unfair that you say I stole your friends idea. I don't even know who your friend is what you're talking about. I'm sorry i made you feel this way.

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  • @ilove3jonasbros Thanks!! :) <333

  • *stares blankly* well, he's a asshole. *point in his face* ASSHOLE!!

    lol, great job.

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