Simple Song (Original)

Tried te write ye a simple song
Not curse too much or stay too long
Just dying te put my faith in you
I feel this way ye know ye feel it too

Hold on te yer fingers
And the rythm'o'toes
Below blind-man-bluffin'
Mass hysteria shows
Lies a place within without
Denies a space te live in doubt

So come on,stop trying just let go
Ye'll find meaning in the places
Ye don't know,ye been going oh-so long
Within the borders of a simple song

When times are hard and yer feelin blue
The circle just won't let you through
Yer dyin' te let them know your view -
It don't matter.
Its a question of the state over -
Whats yours and mine between the lines
Freedom crime te world decline -
It don't matter who you are
We're still searchin 'neath the stars

So come on,stop trying just let go
Ye'll find meaning in the places
Ye don't know,ye been going oh-so long
Within the borders of a simple..

Come on!Stop trying,just let go
Ye'll find MEANING in the places
Ye don't know,ye been going oh-so long
Within the borders of the simple
Irresistible potential
Of a song..


© UncleUsurp 2008

Category:

Music

Tags:

• simple
• song
• uncleusurp
• original
• space
• folk
• blues

[jonno52]

Words are great, guitar work likewise (like those funky 7ths!). What more to say? Favourited.

[UncleUsurp]

many thank you's trot and canter your way kind sir :)

[Cisoma]

wool socks dancing with an old fuzzy carpet, tapping out tiny lightning bolts with every new twist and twirl.

about the visuals: you and your bird look like an neon amoeba at first, which is kind of nice. : )

about the whistling: you are exemplary! happiness caught and bottled fresh.

[UncleUsurp]

pheww.cheers for that.once more,uplifting words.i was nae so keen on the wistlin.nice te know it went down arite :)

[Dengar013]

Man....this is so damn good brother. You really need to make these available for sale or download. You are very talented my friend. You are so different than anything that I have heard before and that is a good thing man! Big ups to you.

Carl

[UncleUsurp]

Man...back at ye!Each of your supportive words is like an eight leaf clover.Thanking you :)

[ineffablerhymes]

I am just gonna keep posting until i get over this song. I dont care, i am not into flattering anyone, anyway a true song is never personal it just comes through you. But this is staying with me for days, it is without a doubt my favorite song of this moment. Love you mate.

[ineffablerhymes]

Maybe you are going through a lull, but this song is timeless mate, the night i met you i didn't get to hear you in full flow, there will never be a perfect ending but this ending comes closer than almost any song i have heard. Love this mate! real poetry.

[potatoisyellow2]

Yes, agreed-this music has roots and yet it is really distinctive and original at the same time. I think this is a very good song

[oldnrone]

ain't half bad on the lyrics there bro!

[poetreesa]

I think this is my favorite of yours so far, I definitely hear the Lennon influence--and to me, most good songs can be directed at humanity as a whole as well as the individual.

Great song, thanks for sharing. Oh and I'm accepting your friend invite :)

[amccann7]

cool original style

[strawberryfields88]

this song is my motto!!! great tune :)

[justmusic247]

i love these words. endearing.

[Weatherhill1]

Sweet.

[captxxchaos]

its amazing what you can do with a simple song.... fine example you have here