This is the first time for me to actually recite one of my own poems.. ^^
Even though I am not using their song in this video, I still want to thank Amanda Lee (Lyrics&Translation) and Annalie (Vocal) for their English fandub of Lacrimosa http://www.youtube.com/user/LeeandLie
This poem was a request to be written to their fandub, thus their song was my inspiration ;)
The credits for the poem itself go to myself. You may repost/use it freely, as long as you give credits to me (:
The poem being recited:
A Lonely Dance -
Amidst smoking, black ruins,
We slowly are floating -
Dancing through the night.
Your eyes - being avert,
You are weeping over him -
Whom I despise so much.
Underneath the stars,
We slowly move around;
Onward, sideward, backward -
As long as I am with you,
Gazing into your eyes.
Your eyes that I love -
I fell in love with you,
So many years ago, it hurts.
We slowly waltz through the night,
Underneath a shower of ashes.
Ashes of your beautiful world,
That died alongside that man -
Tell me, did he ever look at you?
He never even cared for you!
I beg you, start looking at me -
I have loved you this whole time.
These ashes are feathers for me,
Feathers that I plucked off an angel -
Flattening the path for our love!
Why won't you even look at me?
Is it because we are like sisters?
We slowly dance through the snow -
A snow of feathers - or ashes?
Time slows down for each of us;
Your sorrow prolongs your time,
While my happiness prolongs mine.
We continue to dance another night -
Both being lonely on our own.
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