Won Peace - Crunchy (1)

Luffy begins his journey to...wait.... What the hell is happening!?

Cast:
Napiewocki - Monkey D. Luffy, Monkey D. Garp, Guy in Crowd, Jinbe, Edward Newgate (White Beard), Marshall D. Teach (Black Beard), Sengoku, Random Marine 1 and 2
Wryyyyzard - Portgaz D. Ace
Mikami (SoSAbridged) - Gol D. Roger
AtticusAbridged - Sukazuki (Akainu)
TheFourteenthNumber - Emporio Ivankov, Sanjuan Wolf
SaviorDragonFTW - Marco

Category:

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[swordmasterjoshua]

Okay, the MLP jokes were kind of funny.

I liked the bit where the guy said "I only wish that one day I can make such retarded sounds and yet still be badass."

Unfortunately, the pacing was way too fast and it's hard to catch everything. From what I DID catch, the humor you tried to make was just very mediocre. Not bad, but a lot of room for improvment.

[NAPIEWOCKI]

@swordmasterjoshua I agree

Episode 2 fixed basically all of that

[JackWilsonIsAbridged]

What is this? I don't even... Who was that? He did what now? Huh? What? What the fuck?

[NAPIEWOCKI]

@JackWilsonIsAbridged Ace died, Luffy brain went blank, White Beard is pissed, Black Beard shows up.

[FalconFlyer69]

this is really unfunny

[NAPIEWOCKI]

@FalconFlyer69 Thanks for your insight, I'll try to improve in the future.

[mattroks101]

Ratings disabled I see >_>

[hellsonlychildV1]

*Insert witty comment here*

[GoodCanBeDone]

I'm not exactly sure what I just saw....

...I like this, I think