***PLEASE FEEL FREE TO LEAVE CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISM: I NEED IT*** A poem written about a month ago about moving on from a break-up.
I am finding it enormously therapeutic to air my dirty laundry like this =D
This poem is inspired by Stacey Ann Chinn's 'Catalog the Insanity', which is vastly vastly better and can be viewed below:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OZveF_IOrvE
This is how I feel at the moment. Nice to know I'm not alone. Hope it gets better!
orangepeel105 1 year ago
Very nice!! 5 stars!
It is SO refreshing to see poetry on youtube!!
-OurTV
OurTVproductions 2 years ago
you're great. I really envy people who can write poetry. I've never been any good at it. I'm more of a storyteller, myself.
artemisfair 2 years ago
you're inspiring. i may get rid of my writer's block soon thanks to these.
yougotshtyle 2 years ago
That was really moving
MewHamHead 2 years ago
I think you just successfully described the heartbreak one feels when a first love breaks ones heart. You expressed a shitload of ponderances in this. Lots to reflect about.
nimitta1 2 years ago
Some create songs, some paint, & others write poetry. Any of the 3 express a release of emotion when performed with passion, devotion, and affection. As for myself, my sax is my escape.
xavierartorivs 2 years ago
Spontaneous Attack = Ninja Chop!
hunkamonkiman 2 years ago
Thanks!
Umbalafum 2 years ago