Rap Song Original 2

This is my second rap song that I wrote... As I said I don't listen to rap so I'm kind of scared of the comments I'm going to get... This song was written and produced by Justin Herbst and Jason Lawson... This isn't my beat...

Song Name: Life

Lyrics:
INTRO:
Dont you hate it sometimes.
When life dont go your way.
Feels like everyones against you.
Just wana end it here.

VERSE 1:
People dying livin life while crying.
Trying to stay remorse.
Wife leaves you ending with a divorse.
No more words to say so you wana end it right here.
Untill you dissapear in the life cycle that brings you to rest.
The only test is the one that god sets upon.
Dont know what's going on.
Pointing a gun to your head with no return.
Leaving the ones loved all to concern.

CHORUS:
Dont bring no more tears.
Keep inside yo fears.
Wishing it was all untrue.
Another thing life brings to you.
Dont bring no more tears.
Keep inside yo fears.
Wishing it was all untrue.
Another thing life brings to you.

VERSE 2:
After time you start to feel stressed.
Hoping god will help you to be blessed.
Depressed of the sin that you have caused.
Left your wife bleeding everything paused.
Past to present your life fading away.
Digging in the back yard a lonley grave.
When your done you leave and try to put it in the past.
Atlast everything you stood for goes by so fast.
Obsession takes over while you stand in the present.
On the cement you see the initials triple six.
No mater what it depics the conflict.
Just ask yourself why it had to be me.
Even though you dissagree you miss being free.

CHORUS:
Dont bring no more tears.
Keep inside yo fears.
Wishing it was all untrue.
Another thing life brings to you.
Dont bring no more tears.
Keep inside yo fears.
Wishing it was all untrue.
Another thing life brings to you.

VERSE 3:
The next part everything starts to change.
As you feel it strange its just the start of a new life.
Maybe not a new wife but a new beggining.
To put what you had all behind lifes not thinning.
Just realize that your life will renew.
True meaning that maybe dont make sense.
Its intence even dispite of what you been through.
Its not untrue just the new beggining of what your mom told you.

CHORUS:
Dont bring no more tears.
Keep inside yo fears.
Wishing it was all untrue.
Another thing life brings to you.
Dont bring no more tears.
Keep inside yo fears.
Wishing it was all untrue.
Another thing life brings to you.

VERSE 4:
God bless the mans soul who has problems.
Down and depressed.
Feels like the weight of the words on your chest.
Cant sleep, always worried, so stressted no rest.
So you kick back to rest.
Pop a xanax alot of problems.
How you going to solve em.
Feeling good flying high.
Theres a blessing in the sky.
Thinking theres an easy way out.
You tell yourself a lie.
Your a has been never was never will no life to fufill.
Just pop the pill.
Looking for a way to kill_____ yourself.
Go to a drawer pull a knife.
The next morning who finds you.
Your wife.

CHORUS:
Dont bring no more tears.
Keep inside yo fears.
Wishing it was all untrue.
Another thing life brings to you.
Dont bring no more tears.
Keep inside yo fears.
Wishing it was all untrue.
Another thing life brings to you.

Category:

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[MrSeanlamkins]

It's awesome, you just need to scrap together a $120 mic and you're set

[slowmofo357]

@MrSeanlamkins Thanks bro. Yeah man I actually got a little recording studio going, Akai Mpk49, Condenser Mic. I may try another and put it on itunes.

[streetsk8ter01]

honestly you need work alot homie. I rap and i rap only depressioning shit, cuz im real. unlike hip hop today wich people consider rap. this would sounnd better if it didnt echo. anyways for the the people that havent heard depressing rap your fucking retarded. then you dont listen to rap you listen to dick radio hop. fuckin listen to ice cube or dre or eminem or xtacy(me) or any real rapper out there. keep ya head up man just work on it. my myspace is myspacedotcom backslash officialxtacy

[slowmofo357]

Thanks bro... Ill check your page out...

[madisonkimbell]

Ok, im commenting. Rap song should not be so depressing, it sounds good and the lyrics r good but not for a rap song. I like it maybe you should just sing it.

[slowmofo357]

your an idiot  listen to the radio lol

[yusefwii]

dude i believe u made this but it needs pratice it doesnt rhym at all

[ogogopogoify]

for sure this shyt is bomb... all i can say is these new rappers like lil wayne need sum better lyrics

[themotherfuckinshit1]

sucks

[TheJmanvip]

rap can be depressing faget listen to eminem he talks about his life listen to mockingbird and hailllies song u did good dude

[paintballkid15]

niice broo

[dannyday58218195]

i liked this - the depressed topic doesnt bother me - im depressed so it works and i can relate.

liked chorus it worked and flowed well.

i would say was that the Verses seemed too small and they didnt really flow with the music - whoever was rappin em had no emotion in their voice at all. In a sense you could argue a depressed rapper might sound like this - but emotions such as anger and passion can shine through - this was just flat line reading not really rappin...

[Muzzzicman]

I think this song is great!!!!

if this was done in full production in a studio it would be a killer tune.