There were moments when the editing rocked (like building the machine). And I liked the fact that your character "vanishes" in the pan... but it was unmotivated.
Definitely an art piece, which, for what it is, works well. Some rough editing when it comes to the actors interacting, and story that doesn't quite work.
Keep trying. You are at the beginning stages of mastering editing. -Luke
Great idea! Fun seeing him make the guitar playing machine, you are also one of the few that did the 720 pan, but hard to pull off effectively in a 3 min, eh? Also, the sound was definitely a negative, getting the sound off the cam would help loads. Still fun though, thanks for the ride!
Nice music; that worked well with the story; guitar fitted to the story; other elements seemed a little forced; acting is there just needed a bit more refining in my opinion.
There were moments when the editing rocked (like building the machine). And I liked the fact that your character "vanishes" in the pan... but it was unmotivated.
Definitely an art piece, which, for what it is, works well. Some rough editing when it comes to the actors interacting, and story that doesn't quite work.
Keep trying. You are at the beginning stages of mastering editing. -Luke
TomySky 4 years ago
Great idea! Fun seeing him make the guitar playing machine, you are also one of the few that did the 720 pan, but hard to pull off effectively in a 3 min, eh? Also, the sound was definitely a negative, getting the sound off the cam would help loads. Still fun though, thanks for the ride!
PixelPablo 4 years ago
Nice music; that worked well with the story; guitar fitted to the story; other elements seemed a little forced; acting is there just needed a bit more refining in my opinion.
stephennasby 4 years ago
a couple of great, interesting shots...sound was a bit rough, editing was good.
wilkinson4925 4 years ago
Dude, love your cut and dry way of editing and directing. Great work!
DanielGardner 4 years ago