Joe & Jess Short Story pt 3

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Uploaded by on Jan 22, 2009

Kevin POV
We got back to the hotel and went to our room. Joe wasnt in there. We told him not to leave the hotel. I wonder where he is. We started looking for him around the hotel but he wasnt anywhere. I was walking backwards trying to find him when I bumped into someone. I turned around and there was the most beautiful girl I have ever seen.

????: OMG youre Kevin!
Kevin: Yeah, and this is Nick.
Nick: Hey whats up?
???:Im Ally and this is my friend Melanie.

Nick did a double take when he looked at Melanie.

Nick: whoa.
Kevin: better close your mouth or the flies will fly in.

Melanie giggled.

Kevin: Have you guys seen our brother?
Ally: No I havent. We were actually just looking for my friend, and her sister. We told her not to leave the hotel, but does she ever listen to us? No.
Nick: We said the same to Joe. Kevin lets try calling him.

I dialed his number and waited for him to pick up.

Joe POV
Joe: Hello?
Kevin: Hey Dude where are you? We are back at the hotel and cant find you anywhere. I thought we told you not to wander off too far.
Joe: Dont worry Im still at the hotel.
Kevin: Where at the hotel?
Joe: In the Janitors closet on the bottom floor.

Kevin groaned.

Kevin: Again????
Joe: Hey I have an excuse this time.
Kevin: uh huh. Sure.
Joe: Really, I was being chased by the screaming fans!
Kevin: Oh ok well we will come and get you.

Kevin POV
Kevin: he was being chased by fans, and got locked in a closet.
Nick: Again?
Mel: He does this often?
Nick: yeah.
Mel: I think Im going to call Jess..

Joe POV
Jessicas phone started ringing a couple minutes later.

Mel: Jess where are you? We told you not to leave the hotel.
Jess: I didnt.
Mel: So where are you?
Jess: In a Janitors closet.
Mel: Again?
Jess: Hey I have an excuse. I was being chased by screaming fans! Hello? Hello?! Well thats rude she hung up on me.
Joe: Hmmm. I wonder why.

She shrugged.

Jess: I never understand what goes on in her mind.

Ally POV
Ally: What did she say?
Mel: That she was being chased by screaming fans.
Nick: oh is your sister famous?

Mel snorted.

Mel: Uh no. she is just kind of weird. Shes trapped in a closet though. We should try to get her out.
Kevin: Wait both Joe and Jessica were trapped in a closet because of screaming fans. They are in the same one.
Mel: Great. Hopefully Jess wasnt too embarrassing.

We went off to the closet to rescue the two.

Joe POV
Joe: Hey Jess can I have your number? We could hang out sometime.
Jess: Sure. Here give me your phone.

She took mine and I took hers and programmed my number in. she came over and sat by me and took my phone and took a picture of the two of us. I did the same with her phone.

Joe: So how long are you guys here for?
Jess: two weeks. This is our second day. You?
Joe: Same except its our 3rd day.
Jess: cool. Joe you are a really cool guy. Im glad I met you.
Joe: Im glad I met you too. I can tell we are going to be great friends.

She looked over at me and smiled. We saw the rolls of toilet paper on the shelf and looked at each other. We smiled and raced over to the rolls of paper and started stacking a pyramid. The door opened and it scared Jessica and she tripped into me and caused us to stumble into the pyramid of toilet paper. She landed on top of me. We just started laughing.

Mel: Jess. Get off him. I am so sorry Joe.
Joe: Its fine. I havent had this much fun in a while.

She rolled off of me and I stood up and extended my arms out to help her up.

Kevin: What did you two do exactly?
Jess: Thumb war, rock paper scissors, and other games like that, got to know each other.
Joe: So Ill call you later Jess? Maybe we can go to the beach?
Jess: Ok sounds good.

I leaned over and kissed her on the cheek. She blushed and looked away. I smiled and me and my brothers walked away leaving a squealing Melanie and Ally behind us. I couldnt wait to call her tonight.

Ok so the ending was kind of dumb, but oh well. So tell me what you think. I mean it might be better off as just a short story, but if you guys want it to be a full story let me know.

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  • keep going this is really funny.

  • Keep on going! I love it!

  • keep doing it but also do sorry "!!!

  • i love it keep it goin

  • aahhh i love this

    its so cute

    keep doin it plz

  • seriously?

    this is very believable

    its really really really good

    and I think that it would be very good as a real story, but only if you want to/have time to

  • keep doing it make it a long story its good

  • KEEP DOING IT.....

  • AHHH YOU DEFFO HAVE TO KEEP DOIGN IT!

    hahaa

    more asapp.

    love it!

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