Tanning Bed Problems
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Three things that I thought were very well done were:
1) The introduction: Everything was clearly enunciated and understandable. It was well written with a nice transition into the first point. The inflections in your voice worked well with the whole speech, and started in the introduction.
2) Voice and 3) Wit: The youtube video reminded me of a news report, and I thought the voice and wording were perfect for the topic. Certain phrases were humorous.
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Good facts
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To myself,
Three things I like about this speech are the way I used my voice to convey emotion, how I backed up my speech with facts, and my transitions to new points. I feel like the first aspect, the use of emotion in voice, is an effective way to entice an audience. I also believe that the facts used give enough support to the speech in order to accurately inform someone on the dangers of the topic.
pburghguy23 1 year ago