Songwriting Tips 1: Lyrics

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Uploaded by on Sep 17, 2007

Hey guys here is a long list of things you could do to make me happy!
1) Comment or subscribe!
2) Get or album on Itunes: http://www.itunes.com/trickofdisaster
3) Get our Album on Cdbaby: http://www.cdbaby.com/trickofdisaster
4) Become our friend on Myspace: http://www.myspace.com/trickofdisaster
5) Search us on facebook under Trick of Disaster.
Thanks so much!

Here are a few tips I had on not forcing Lyrics

If you like it listen to my other songs on my profile or on my myspace:

www.myspace.com/trickofdisaster

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  • Yeah, but what rhymes with "huh huh huh pant pant pant pant gasp gasp gasp" ?

    Oh, that's right: You are my son.

    *grin*

  • haha, still the only one alive who likes that song

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  • It is not a good idea. Nobody should listen to this absolute douche. I also happen to know that he sells drugs to babies

  • That's actually a really good idea. Thanks for the advice.

  • @somerandomassguy they can both be good, but one will always be better than the other

  • Lol put your better rhyme last, then your worse rhyme first.... hmmm why not just write 2 good lines in the first place?

  • You should not be allowed to give people songwriting advice, as you cannot write songs. However, while watching this steaming pile of toss I came up with some lyrics you may want to use in your next song:

    "She was looking for ture love,

    But he just wanted touch.

    I post videos on Youtube

    Cos I don't get out much."

  • who are theese sad people asking you for songwriter tips?

    people, NEVER settle with a bad rhyme, you can say the same thing a million ways. read a dictionary

  • thanks, again!

  • nice

  • thanks

  • I relly like your tips, but i only see one video of yours with tips, do you have any more?

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