Songwriting Tips 1: Lyrics
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It is not a good idea. Nobody should listen to this absolute douche. I also happen to know that he sells drugs to babies
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That's actually a really good idea. Thanks for the advice.
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@somerandomassguy they can both be good, but one will always be better than the other
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Lol put your better rhyme last, then your worse rhyme first.... hmmm why not just write 2 good lines in the first place?
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You should not be allowed to give people songwriting advice, as you cannot write songs. However, while watching this steaming pile of toss I came up with some lyrics you may want to use in your next song:
"She was looking for ture love,
But he just wanted touch.
I post videos on Youtube
Cos I don't get out much."
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who are theese sad people asking you for songwriter tips?
people, NEVER settle with a bad rhyme, you can say the same thing a million ways. read a dictionary
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thanks, again!
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nice
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thanks
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I relly like your tips, but i only see one video of yours with tips, do you have any more?
Yeah, but what rhymes with "huh huh huh pant pant pant pant gasp gasp gasp" ?
Oh, that's right: You are my son.
*grin*
BillyBughead 4 years ago
haha, still the only one alive who likes that song
trickofdisaster2 4 years ago