Rap Battle #11 - Spiderman vs. Captain Hook
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Gotta say not the best stuff but that was not to bad
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Spidy
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Why does the first talking guy looks like a girl.?
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@Dhanzz23 if you don't like it then get the fuck outta here and stop complaining like a little bitch
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im still your fan dude
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Dr. House Vs. Sherlock Holmes :D
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People who dis these raps are twatty counts god get a life
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Raps are generally sung in rhyme, not spoken word. Inflections make a huge difference and most of this was spoken monotone. Words that don't rhyme well can be hidden by modifying the tone, inflection and emphasis on certain syllables, but when you just speak the words casually its got to be perfect. The biggest problem? It sounds like you are reading the rap, from a paper or computer screen or something. Take the time to memorize the rap and let the music dictate how it flows from your mouth.
ixamraxi 20 hours ago 5
You guys got good raps but you seriously need more emotion and more umph into it!
PoeticAnonymous 1 day ago 3