Sneak Peek ~ TLK2 ~ City of Sin

Current WIP [Work in Progress for you slow people]. I expect this to get done in ~4 days. I'm still getting used to SV9, so'z, bare with me. But, yus! I have started to make these silly disney movies again. xP

Give me your constructive criticism! I want to get better. Suggest things!

I own NOTHING in this video. (That being the audio, video clips.)
Tysvm.

Sorry for the quality! I don't know what I'm doing wrong. :c

Category:

Entertainment

Tags:

• city
• of
• sin
• escape
• the
• fate
• lion
• king

[omghaiithere]

Thanks a lot! :D

I was unsure about the tv sim. as well. I was thinking about changing that, so I probably will. And I'll work on adding some overlays in the beginning; it's a tad difficult and time consuming, but I will deffinately try. c:

[redlinelies]

You got the timing down for sure. I wouldn't say there is something that you have to change here. but if I were you I'd tone down some effecs just a tad bit so you can see abit more. Like the tv sim. And maybe add something that overlays in the beginning when it flashes to to drums? I like the swap of clips at 14 secs though. A lil short clip to really give some good critisism. But keep it up. You got alot of things you can experiment with. and you are off to a good start yarpyarp.