Let Me In (original)

An original song, wrote it in a record breaking three hours. Opinions welcome.

Lyrics:

I know you're hurting
Life is a burden
But don't you cry
I'm sending a message out
You're gonna be alright

But you're aching, aching
Your heart's been a-breaking
There's no one to open the door
When the light's seeping in
It will make you begin
To believe it could happen to you

Gonna make you see
You belong with me
And there's no one to take
This lovin' away from you again
Gonna make you see
How life can be
If you'd open your heart
And let me in

Where do you want to go?
Who can you trust?
Time and time again
You worry too much

And the stars at night
They will be your guide
When the road is too hard to see
And your heart will prevail
Though at times it seems frail
Love travels long distance
And fights the resistance

Gonna make you see
You belong with me
And there's no one to take
This lovin' away from you again
Gonna make you see
How life can be
If you'd open your heart
And let me in
Let me in

Category:

Music

Tags:

• ScribbleTunes
• original

[nvca9403tgut]

did you have your email program running when you did this? at the end there is a computer generated sound that goes "boo-bonggg!"

Can I rip this to an MP3 and listen to it in my car?

[ScribbleTunes]

Yes, MSN Messenger was on! And you may rip...:) ~Scribble

[LisaW0990]

o0o make a CD and ill buy it ^^

[ScribbleTunes]

Thank you very much for commenting. Yeah, someday there might be a cd, who knows:) Happy holidays!

[Melly1806]

Is somewhere someone who likes to produce here? She´s soooooo great!!!!

[ScribbleTunes]

Thank you very much for commenting. Happy holidays!

[toddmakesnoise]

when you play songs in a lower key like this, your voice really cuts over the music beautifully. I mean it always sounds great, but your voice seems to come to the front a bit more when the guitar is playing lower tones. You have such a unique voice, so gently raspy and soothing..

[coolboylulu]

I found how beautiful life is after hearing your original nice song!

I think we've already "let you and your music in" to our lives, yeah, truly it is!

[MattBlytheTheOne]

never stop writing songs Lene <3 xxxxxxxx

[rlyf7]

Yet another fabulous one! Awesome! So Real!

[NiklasWalendy]

Oh my...

[CheapOneLiners]

Such a nice song. I needed a pick-me-up today and that was it. Thanks Tunes.

[kennymelodica]

wonderful - great feel to the song - 5 stars

[withnailus]

You have a wonderful sense of melody, you can write a great songs

[kenronr]

great music, but ditch the hat. Hides your good looks.

[MattBlytheTheOne]

i dont think he got it !

[SimonGerick]

very nice song! i wish that something comes to my mind to, when i do some improvisations but it don't wanna happen :(

Still waiting for your first CD :D