Torn Apart: Part 1

I was going to wait to put this out but I love it so I can't wait. I don't know how many parts there will be yet cuz I'm not completely done writing it yet. But anyways I hope you like the first part. It gets better in the next part I promise but I'm going to give you the ages of the characters so you don't get confused:
Miley: 17
Zac: 20
Ashley: 24
Selena: 17
Tiffany: 23
Cole: 5
Lily: 1 month
Joe: 20
Heather: 45
Corbin: 20
David Henrie: 24
Chelsea: 19

If you're saying wow they're really young. Just remember back then they were really young to get married and stuff especially the women. And now some info on the characters since I didn't make any promos.

Miley: She's in first class with her fiance' Joe, her mother Heather & her best friend Demi. She's marrying Joe because her father died & left her and her mother with alot of debt and no money.

Joe: Joe is super rich from money that he inherited from his father just before he died & he loves Miley
very much but he hates her mother.

Demi: Demi is Miley's bff. She is also rich from her parents.

Heather: She's the snobby mother of Miley.

Ashley: Is rich from her parents & is married to a very wealthy man but she isn't married to him for his money. She doesn't even care about money that much but she's got lots of it.

Zac: A 3rd class ticket holder. He is aboard with his bff Corbin & is going to America to be reunited with his sister.

Selena: Is also a 3rd class passenger. She has a 1 month old daughter Lily who's father died due to an illness and left Selena with no money of any kind.

Tiffany: She also has lots of money. But not because she earns it. She marries rich men just to get her hands on her money & then divorces them taking lots of their money with her b/c she refuses prenups. She grew up with hardly any money.

Cole: Is Ashley's son. Who's father is waiting on them in America.

Corbin: Is on his way to America to start a new life with his best friend Zac.

David: Is the richest person on the ship. He's married to Chelsea. They met through they're parents but David unlike his father didn't inherit his money he worked for it.

Chelsea: Is married to David but not for his money they're totally in love with each other.

Jennifer: Is Miley & Demi's maid.

Josh Lucas: Is the owner of the ship.

David Deluise: Is a worker on the ship

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• Jiley

[DemiLovato156]

whens the next one going to be up?

[RealLifeCinderella]

idk

[paigeanator2009]

Loved it!!!! I can't wait for the next part!!

[RealLifeCinderella]

Thanks

[lgilbert0808]

loved it!!! can't wait for the next one!!!!

[RealLifeCinderella]

Thanks

[zoeygirl11]

PLEASE make another one PLEASE

[dannieshockz]

This is really Good And i really want you to make part 2. Please doo.

[zileylove0940]

why haven't made u did really good on this and i think u desvere a 5 stars for this and i hope zac and miley meet on the next one

[dannieshockz]

I love this i really do.........But i really wanna see what happens next!!! please hurry (sorry for sounding pushyy)

[dannieshockz]

Awsomeee(: it was extremly good! cant wait dor the next(:

[madyestichique]

i'm kinda loving it :))

[racheljonas1996]

neat...I hope it's Jiley not Ziley I love this!!!!!!!!!1