Track #7 - Untouchable - Feat. Jay-Z
Uploader Comments (bigoverpac666)
All Comments (9)
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how dare u rap on big l and jay z beat smfh
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YOU FUCKING SUCK LOL......
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nigga wack for real.
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LMFAO!!!!!!
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(cont.) Sorry my 1st comment didn't come out right.
I meant to say that you need to work on your rhymes (1st line)
My last comment was "at least your not doing that garbage 4 bar raps that modern rappers use."
Anyway, keep at it bro. You've got some good metaphors in there too.
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You need to
I run you over with my car or worse, I'll flatten you/
Like an iron board this is the war you wish you never endorsed.
Your timing's off. Your 1st bar should end with worse(unlessU intended to lag your bars..then its okay). U should add more internals too. You've got a few here or there (board & war for example..slant rhymes), but most of yours are basic. I give you props though...at least your not doing that garbage
with my iron board, this
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when is your album going to be released?
wtf - shitty quality is this... lol man just record your rap, wear earphones for the instrumental and use som frikkin shareware to mix ist together.
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GET RID OF THEM CHRIS!!! lol thats one fucked up pic of shawn
boiled eggs arent hard.
THAT IS FALSE INFORMATION!
khaosgate 3 years ago
NO!!!! ur wrong !!!!! lol
bigoverpac666 3 years ago