The FanFiction Critic, episode 24, "Oops-A-Daisy," part 2

Part 2 of 6. Today's fanfiction belongs entirely to the author. It can be read in its entirety here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5881031/1/bOops_b_bA_b_bDaisy_b. Suggest bad fanfiction or participate in the Halloween Tribute: thefanfictioncritic@gmail.com

Category:

Comedy

Tags:

• fanfiction critic
• bad fanfiction review
• harry potter
• teen pregnancy

[WhiteWings930]

The fact that Dumbledore didn't know Draco had been ordered to kill him is also out of canon, Dumbledore knew about it. Plus... 'turning an egg into a cup and then make it do cartwheels' isn't the stupidest thing Malfoy's done so far surely, what with impregnating his supposed enemy and all.

[liebeistschonxD]

..Oh my God. This is horrible. Draco is so out of character, and all of the adults are too calm. Good grief...What is with this fandom and messed up pairings?

[paratiisilintu]

I'm not very familiar with Harry Potter canon, I've only read the first three books and that was ages ago, but from what I've gathered the Malfoys are filthy rich and pretty well-known. So the news of Draco's bastard child being on the paper, especially what seems to be the Harry Potter equivalent on a tabloid... kinda makes sense? I dunno. It's horrible nonetheless.

[Fullmetalkitty11]

Oh god Draco is so fucking out of character I want to bang my head against a wall

[embluvya]

Um.... She didn't make up that thing about the eggcup and the cartwheels..... SHe stole that, and then lied about it..... That's in the fifth harry potter book. I have no respect for plagiarists.

[ztslovebird]

There is no way Mrs. Weasely would've taken Ginny's pregnancy in stride.

[SG1RoolsTheRoost]

If I got pregnant at boarding school I'd go ahead and drop out,not move in with the baby daddy I hate! And I wouldn't kiss him when I was sober!!

[creatorofevil]

@creatorofevil *That is why, sorry.

[creatorofevil]

Yes, I totally was psyched to be a dad when I was sixteen. That why I always played as Goku or Vegeta on my Dragon Ball Z games.

[MyLadyGreensleeves77]

Actually, contrary to what you say at 8:40, Hermione IS 17 in book 6, because her birthday is in September, so she is almost a year older than Harry. As long as the story takes place after September, the author would have gotten Hermione's age right. That doesn't make this story any better, I'm just nitpicking. Your review was wonderful as always.

[mogseltof]

Strangely enough the only things that really bothered me was that forgetfulness potion was a first year potion, and eggs into cups doing cartwheels was in the OWLs. Apparently I've become inured to badfic, and some innate sense in the back of my head is screaming in terror.