Scooby Doo and the Horrific Accident
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What a nice cheery story. I was rather impressed by the vocabulary for a 9 year old. I suspect the teacher just wrote that because she was didn't know how to deal with two deaths and severe brain damage in a story that had "begun so well". I thought it was grand! PS. If your mum and dad sobered up, I hope you had a good Christmas day!
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I love how you killed off two of the most important scooby-doo characters in a paragraph! WEll done!
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and where was scooby through this?? xx
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Oh my god I will be laughing for weeks! XD
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Hilarious! I actually laughed out loud. XD The music just perfected it.
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When I was 9 my teacher made my mum come into school to have a meeting about one of my stories. It was called demons vs the mafia :)
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Your 9 and half year old self made some wise decisions: kill the boring ones and save the funny guy and the hot girl!
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reminds me of one of my stories where I killed off 9 people violently, some guy got his brains smashed out with a hammer...and I was 10
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I like :D
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A misleading beginning, or a beautiful metaphor? :P
I like how she conveniently glossed over the fact there was probably some severe mental issues developing. Today you would have been diagnosed with ADHD, drugged up and a note would have been sent home to your Mum saying 'You don't play well with others.'
divinemissm15 2 months ago 9
@divinemissm15 You're so right. Lucky I grew out of the 'severe mental issues' stage, right?!
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