"Bullet" - Short Film
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Nice. I like the way that it is "implied" that there is something out there.
You're cute, too *wink*
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u copied off of ginderfilmproductions u retards why are u shooting at water retard
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Look man, you obviously have love for film. As you make lots of short films. But, I am trying to be respectful, but at the same time, honest.
Why do you not put any time into any of them?
Why not take time with script & storyboards?
What about dressing the part?
It is not about quantity. But quality.
Write me if you want input
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Herb, you're scarin' me.
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One thing you could do, rather than redo the AR sequence would be to just insert a scene where you "find" the AR. Maybe the sea monster ate a mercenary or Special Forces guy/girl or something. Some fake blood, spent cartridges, swamp muck, the AR and an obvious monster trail to segue to the pond might be more dramatic than just swapping props.
This would fit in consistently with the character not being totally familiar with the weapon, and why it ran dry after only a few shots. 2 for 1.
There is a monster in there!!!
remo2012 2 years ago
Many of these shorts are like sketches to a painter. They are quick works to practice the craft.
I have one hour to make a film, what can I do?
remo2012 3 years ago
I try to do my own stunts when I can.
remo2012 3 years ago
That's great acting.
remo2012 3 years ago
That is a great point.
remo2012 3 years ago
Man the AR-15 just looked too cool.
Perhaps I'll go back and cut it with a shotgun and see how that looks.
remo2012 3 years ago