A song I wrote in an hour or so. And no I'm not being arrogant. I don't think it's song gold. It's a cool little jam I came up with. The lyrics aren't very amazing and the playing or singing isn't virtuosic. It's tight but nothing special. I am thinking of adding another verse, maybe a bridge, and definitely a solo.
I do really like the production I did though. I got a nice mix. IMO anyways. It is a pretty cool song.
Lyrics:
I got your number that was hard enough
It made me shake and sweat believe you me babe it was rough
I've never ever felt like that before
And now you won't answer my calls no more
It seems to me, you just can't see
It wouldn't hurt ya to come get with me
You must not know, you've sunk too low
To even give yourself for free
But I've got you in my arms X2
(Now kill me baby)
I always thought that kinda thing was hard
Talk to a girl real slick but man that was the easy part
You made a fool of me but now I know
To not ask every girl I see for more
It seems to me, you just can't see
It wouldn't hurt ya to come get with me
You must not know, you've sunk too low
To even give yourself for free
But I've got you in my arms X2
thanks very much :)
EvianBaby 3 years ago
Nice work. I like it a lot. 5 out of 5
Pete
PMiddy001 3 years ago