dbz fanfic final battle for peace part 1

i decided to created this fanfic (just a test one) to see if i could make one. plz post a comment on who well i did and things i did wrong. sorry about bad quality. i will post part 2 if you like this one. i will start making ultimate destruction fanfic soon hopefully after this fanfic is finished. i worked with my cousin (youngsizzla 196) he has a shin budokai fanfic i think.

Category:

Film & Animation

Tags:

• dbz
• fanfic
• final
• battle
• for
• peace
• part

[evilsupergohan]

this is a test. the real version will come soon!!!

[tazzzy123]

is dat a plasma screen t.v.?

alright vid 4/5

[evilsupergohan]

no but it is a big t.v though. i zoomed in.

[JindeSaiya]

This is good man and it has potential.

Just try to edit the fights. Also try to get a new twist on the story to make it fresh and new.I'm sure a lot of people have seen similar ones. Just some advice. 5/5

[evilsupergohan]

thanks for the advise. i am a huge fan on your fanfic cant wait for part 6

[evilsupergohan]

i know but you helped me make it

any way it might be better when i do part 2

[sojiroT]

FUCKING GREAT STORYLINE,

just make it better quaality

[desertstorm50249]

nice for a test fan fic

[cashgettag]

im jus sayin its alittle to bright

[llalaljsih1224356y]

oh cool this looks like ograndebata fanfic.

[JindeSaiya]

This is good man and it has potential.

Just try to edit the fights. Also try to get a new twist on the story to make it fresh and new.I'm sure a lot of people have seen similar ones. Just some advice. 5/5