dbz fanfic final battle for peace part 1
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FUCKING GREAT STORYLINE,
just make it better quaality
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nice for a test fan fic
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im jus sayin its alittle to bright
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oh cool this looks like ograndebata fanfic.
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This is good man and it has potential.
Just try to edit the fights. Also try to get a new twist on the story to make it fresh and new.I'm sure a lot of people have seen similar ones. Just some advice. 5/5
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this is a test. the real version will come soon!!!
evilsupergohan 3 years ago
is dat a plasma screen t.v.?
alright vid 4/5
tazzzy123 3 years ago
no but it is a big t.v though. i zoomed in.
evilsupergohan 3 years ago
This is good man and it has potential.
Just try to edit the fights. Also try to get a new twist on the story to make it fresh and new.I'm sure a lot of people have seen similar ones. Just some advice. 5/5
JindeSaiya 3 years ago
thanks for the advise. i am a huge fan on your fanfic cant wait for part 6
evilsupergohan 3 years ago
i know but you helped me make it
any way it might be better when i do part 2
evilsupergohan 3 years ago