B5 Story Pt 4 (End)

Part 4

Category:

Music

Tags:

• B5
• tv
• short
• film

[free2lookcute]

Opinion:NOT to be a hater or anything but i think u should have added more comedy and drama to the story. Also on parts when b5 were talking it didnt sound like them or match up 2 theirpersonalities wat so ever.

Question:why on every part u mention carnell in "hes stuffing his mouth" or giving a quick 3 word statement with his brothers?

Quick statement: good job working on it.

[jasmy13]

Reply 2 opinion: Umm well Idk this was my 1st like for real story so I'm still improvimg my carft It get's better I like to think. You don't think it seemed like how they might act? I thought it fit ok but maybe that's cuz I wrote it.

Answer to question: It wasn't every and some times I forget to have people talk so I throw them in real quick I guess that must have just happend with him alot.

And thanks I do try

[mianna12]

omg ii justt lovee yours storiess theree good lool

if you make it another b5 story if you don't mean it can you put my name in it :) thxx

But yours storiiee aree really good i loved it!!

keep doin yur thang!!

[jasmy13]

Thanks and idk if imma make another B5 story yet but I think I am.

[imani203]

well my bad their is only the 4th on

[jasmy13]

click on more by "my name" and click Bryan story

[ArIeSbAbE202]

lmao awsome story =]

[free2lookcute]

oh i didnt know it was ur first story. it was good but that stuff i said was like how fell about it. :)

[sndingmessages]

GO GIRL...AWESOME STORY...

[jasmy13]

uh Bryan story

[imani203]

witch story is it