BIONICLE: The Master; Original Fan Fiction Movie! (Part 1/4)

Welcome to the new Spherus Magna.
Set in a time where the Matoran have learned to coexist with the Glatorian races, the Dark Hunter organization has collapsed. Now former Dark Hunter (code name Nolekk) intends to settle some unfinished business.
But complications arise when a dark figure from his past comes with seemingly one goal: kill.

Starring Jedimasterronin as Fire Striker! http://www.youtube.com/user/JedimasterRonin

Category:

Film & Animation

Tags:

• BIONICLE
• stopmotion
• Jedimasterronin
• lego
• fanfic
• R3taliate
• Bam

[air13ek]

HAHAHA! This is awesome. :}

[R3taliate]

@air13ek Thanks!

[DarthZox]

Well done! For a first time stop motion this was excellent! The camera was a little jiggley at times, but nothing to discracting. The effects were great and the sounds were excellent. Although, some background music would have been nice. But all in all I think this is an awesome stop motion! Most people don't do this good on their first stop motion. I look forward to the next 2 parts.

[R3taliate]

@DarthZox Thanks for the review! Camera could have been better, something with my files skipping frames...

>:(

Personally the effects could have been better I think that I will do my best to avoid large explosions in the future.

Guilty as charged. I was in a hurry to get it out due to the fact that I will be away for two weeks, and so forgot background music. This is only my first published stop motion. I have several horrendous ones sitting in my computer. Which won't be published ever.probly

[R3taliate]

@R3taliate And also, I have decided to make four parts. Part two will be background, Part 3... you'll see :), and four will be an epic battle.

[JedimasterRonin]

Excellent work! I really enjoyed working with you on this one. The story itself is quite interesting, sound effect editing was great, and I really enjoyed the action sequences.

One bit of criticism would be that you don't seem to use a tripod, that could be really helpful for some of your shots.

The effects were some of the best I have ever seen from mspaint, great job!

All in all, I loved this one. Can't wait for the next!

[R3taliate]

@JedimasterRonin The tripod was there. It is just a crappy tripod. Also, some of my frames seem to have skipped. Otherwise, it would have been smoother.

Do not worry, part 2 will be much better in every regard.

[R3taliate]

AND YES! I do wish you to critique as much as possible, since this is my first "real" youtube film.