Escalator / De roltrap
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lol!i love ur cartoons!
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HAHAHAHAHAHAH
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AWESOME :D
2 thumbs!
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@pterandon Dude screw off
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really nice
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Strechy legs
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Excellent!
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Thumbs up for the inbreed hillbilly!
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crititque. 0:17 you cut after the action which makes the cut jarring. Cut in the middle of it. like you did at 0:19.
0:33 feet land to stiff and to exact, I would have offset them a little.
Your lighting is good, but I think your film could benefit more from your composition. Your character is always staged in the center of the frame, I would try to find interesting places to but the camera.
Overall this piece is good. Keep it up.
Buddyb309 1 year ago
Thanks for the tips Buddyb!
edwinstudio 1 year ago