My First Complete Composition with MuseScore!

I'm 22, it took me a week to finish this, I hope you enjoy listening to it ONCE lol
Constructive criticism will be highly appreciated :)

This got mixed reviews from my friends:

"This is your best composition so far"
"It sounds like a megadrive soundtrack"
"The tempo is off in some places"
"I'm not sure if I can understand what emotion you are trying to portrait"
"It should be slower"
and:
"It's not exactly a song I'd choose listen twice, but it's not that bad either"

Programs used:
Musescore 0.9.6 (freeware)
CamStudio (freeware) (to capture the video/audio)
The Soundfont it's the default that comes with musescore.

Instruments:
Flute
Flute
Alto Flute
Voice
Alto

Category:

Music

Tags:

• Musescore
• score
• partiture
• composition
• makemusic
• finale
• sibelius

[thrqs]

I really appreciate all your kind comments :)

[bobsonenzo]

hahaha I love it. Keep up the good work!

[JoeTownley]

I like it. More than i like a lot of professional works here. It has an original voice (style) and that's more important than expertly-crafted pablum sometimes. Keep up the good work.

[robhighnam]

@thrqs

Dear thrqs, can you help me please, how can I upload a musescore file to youtube?

BTW, congratulations, nice try....

[Minecraftinator]

It sounds very chaotic, and several notes are together that shouldn't be. Ok for a first try, and maybe even good if you switch up the instrumentation. Still, it needs work, but you tried, so I'll say decent job.

[MrDanielviolino]

como eu coloco outra folha pq eu crio minha partitura ele so passa 2 folha um pedacinho mais eu quero mais folha como eu faco?

[ramalamalin]

Antes de poneros a hacer cosas que no sabeis hacer, poneros a haced una ocmposicion facil para piano, pero bonita y con coherencia.

[ramalamalin]

it's awful

[Underthought]

you need to harmonize this, you have notes playing together that really shouldn't be, try to use some cords, search chord (music) in wiki and read

[Mockatt]

Reminds me of Bartok. Dissonance isn't always a bad thing.

[Carbonclone]

Very dissonant, and it is jarring to listen to. But you have a lot of potential! Keep at it!

[JarekMrSupremo25]

so... very very awfull

[MuffinL0rD]

Wow! After 3 times, it sounds nice! :D