'Heroism' Original Oratory
Uploader Comments (mrconceeded)
All Comments (20)
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his speech is written quite well, very well connected, good points. He sacrificed recent examples with ones more well known and with strong impact, which worked well with his style, but I still believe he could have had more recent stuff to engage us. The only other problem I have with this oration is that there were times when he over-exaggerated his hand gestures unnecessarily. Don't get me wrong, he can use wide gestures, but he should use them less. Overall, still pretty good.
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I loved that OO....lol it makes mine look like ...um something not great. ha-ha.
GREAT JOB!
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@ryanbranom I really liked the speech, but I think more than the speech itself his presentation was great. If anything his presentation of the speech itself could have taken him to win state.
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@Trevor5888 you can't read the speech you wrote in competition, or it's a DQ.
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@veronicavenomx you should! i'd like to see it:)
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Yea man, I'm a 7th generation Texan, but the American takeover of Texas is something I am not proud of. It's unfortunate my existence has been dependent on some greedy Americans.
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very good. amazing man
everything was nice except that you were speaking a bit too fast.
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this is okay. i don't agree with a lot of this kid's stuff
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That's more sos. OO's are ment to be serious and express a unique idea in a clear way. His speech does a good job at accomplishing this.
The NCFCA National Championships.
mrconceeded 3 years ago