Moi Lolita Contest Entry

CRITICS HIGHLY DISCOURAGED, thank you C:!!!!

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First off...
HOLY SHIT THERE'S FUCKIN LINEART *dies* I remember now I usually don't do lineart (takes waaaay too long x.x)

Anyways, ya this is my entry for Ocean's contest for her "Moi Lolita" art book.
I had recorded the ENTIRE process, thumbnails, rough body guidlines, and sketch, but WMM had to be a bitch whenever I tried putting it on there :'(.

But anyways I really like the results of this one~

And I hope I do well in the contest so wish me luck :'D.

Fun Fact: Their outfits were inspired by a thong I own :P.

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LINK TO CONTEST

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FjFzoHUGy1k

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Art, Outfit Design, and Poses-Patricia Kelley(me)
Characters-Arrow and P.T.-oshaikeuchi
Tools-Paint Tool SAI, Intuous 3 Wacom Tablet, Camstudio, Windows Movie Maker
Song- Into the Ocean and Everlasting Friend

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LINK TO FULL SIZE PICTURE

http://artistswan89.deviantart.com/#/d2vm4j1

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PLEASE DO NOT ASK ANY QUESTIONS THAT HAVE ALREADY BEEN ANSWERED IN THE VIDEO AND/OR DESCRIPTION C:

Category:

Howto & Style

Tags:

• P.T.
• Arrow
• oshaikeuchi
• moi
• lolita
• contest

[oshaikeuchi]

ehh i never realized you posted this x) *faves and features*

hope you dont mind ovo

[volbeat1111]

@oshaikeuchi Ahah of course not, the picture was made for you so do whatever you want with it :).

[xNightstars]

Your coloring is phenomenal <3

I don't know why everyone's complaining about big heads, since they look fine to me o3o The only thing that bothers me is that the girl on the left has... an awkward chin. But otherwise, the drawing is amazing~!

[Kenji1234Animelover]

I think its great! I think the heads are fine. People just need to stop being so critical. so what if the heads are a little big. in my opinion it looks just perfect.

[Kenji1234Animelover]

I think its great!

[shadowmuttzr0]

sometimes ur heads were too big but it looks fine here ur getting better

..... but...... her chin looks weird sorry but over all its great

[catsandrats95]

Ooooo.... Nice choice of music. :o I love Blue October. ^w^

Anyway, this is very good! Good luck... I'm sure you'll do well. :3

[princessgato380]

you're an amazing artist!

[iamzawsome]

i like your drawing style

[VanillaCocoaBunny]

obviosly you will win! the heads arent that big. and the eyes arent that small. i like your style of manga!!!!!

[oshaikeuchi]

@volbeat1111 I will leave one more comment. :>

I actually don't understand why everyone's leaving the "big heads" comment. Sure, they're big, but... that's how big I draw my heads. I mean, it's anime. Big ass eyes and big ass heads. oAo I've never seen moe drawn humanly proportionate. xD

I think people might notice it more than others because the eyes are small compared to normal moe art, but, it still looks moe -- I think that's something to be proud of. It really defines your style, imo. :D

[oshaikeuchi]

@volbeat1111 ..it's a whole different picture.

Wow, I forgot about the character limit on YT. xD;

In any case, I don't think it's wrong to not wanna take critiques. It's understandable that you wouldn't, when you've worked so hard on a piece. :x I'm all for people working and their own comfortability level and pace. :D And you have a nice style as it is so even if you work independently, you'll always improve.