11th Annual Urban Word Youth Slam Finals
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@RandoMizzes she killed her children so that her past wouldnt come back to haunt them and their lives were terrible, its like she killed to save them from the dark disgusting earth... thats what i got from it
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Whoa, that left me speechless.
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why isit alway this kinda sad bad poetry i want to hear beautifull poems
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The butterflies in Reverse, Empty cocoons of what used to be beautiful...
Damn.
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Moving. Incredibly moving.
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this was deep soul !
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i dont get it someone help me understand
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God I love this girl.
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that was crazy...she did an excellent job...that was such a tragic ordeal...and you must be a strong person to write such a WELL written poem and then to vocalize it in the same strong manner...I think it would be safe to say you achieved your goal with this poem..
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here name is shelell, shes preforming at BNV finals as we speak
the butterflies in reverser. Empty cocoons of what used to be beautiful!!!!!! WHAT!!! that line went hard
carterqsoccer 2 years ago 12
This is crack yo, dead ass. I know her, shelell taught me how to write poetry
jameswoodard1990 2 years ago 7