Were to start. Guitars are both really good. Great band. Vocals, dude I like your effort but there are way too many places where you go flat. That hurts. Also several places where you terminate that just ain't good. Like 0:49:00 don't do that. Attention to detail! I think it perfected this it would be really worthy. Not perfected its.....a big song and deserves more. Also on the chorus you sound like a violin. Loose the tremelo. NOT HATIN just Take perfect it and lets hear it again.
@tpntx i think it sounds cool
MrBonzo97 4 days ago
@rgjmce666 what is an answer youtube page?
tpntx 1 week ago
@tpntx well it's not an answer youtube page, so it's unlikely anyway
rgjmce666 1 week ago
@rgjmce666 and you know this how?....
tpntx 1 week ago
@tpntx you do realise that cormac is probably never gonna read that?
rgjmce666 1 week ago
Were to start. Guitars are both really good. Great band. Vocals, dude I like your effort but there are way too many places where you go flat. That hurts. Also several places where you terminate that just ain't good. Like 0:49:00 don't do that. Attention to detail! I think it perfected this it would be really worthy. Not perfected its.....a big song and deserves more. Also on the chorus you sound like a violin. Loose the tremelo. NOT HATIN just Take perfect it and lets hear it again.
tpntx 1 week ago
@kakkiOne yeah i only noticed that today lol
rgjmce666 2 weeks ago
@rgjmce666 check his name... :)
kakkiOne 2 weeks ago
@kakkiOne damn i must not feed them :(
rgjmce666 2 weeks ago
@rgjmce666 it's a fucking troll dude! :)
kakkiOne 2 weeks ago